for kissing you10/22/2006 c1 
45Onatu the Dark Rose
Great poem. Worthy of a fav I think. Yes. Yes, It is now a fav.
Your cried eh? Tell me about it. There's nothing more painful than loving someone who doesn't love you. That is the intention right? Its how I see the poem atleast.
Was this you? Was thsi resolved? Am I wrong in my assumption?
Oh, names Daniel by the by. Nice to meet you and I guess we can be friends. he he
45Onatu the Dark RoseGreat poem. Worthy of a fav I think. Yes. Yes, It is now a fav.
Your cried eh? Tell me about it. There's nothing more painful than loving someone who doesn't love you. That is the intention right? Its how I see the poem atleast.
Was this you? Was thsi resolved? Am I wrong in my assumption?
Oh, names Daniel by the by. Nice to meet you and I guess we can be friends. he he
2/1/2006 c1 nofaceme
this is so sad...very good work here. I had something like this happen once...keep it up
this is so sad...very good work here. I had something like this happen once...keep it up
1/6/2006 c1 100Abby Sequioa
omg this was... amazing... it was so good. The rhyme and rythm was SPECTACALAR! I absoutley love it
100Abby Sequioaomg this was... amazing... it was so good. The rhyme and rythm was SPECTACALAR! I absoutley love it
1/6/2006 c1 39SliversofSilverPain
wow... very wow... I cried while reading this poem. Wow. *silver tears stream down my cheeks* *bows* you are a true poet
39SliversofSilverPainwow... very wow... I cried while reading this poem. Wow. *silver tears stream down my cheeks* *bows* you are a true poet
1/6/2006 c1 11les petits bateaux
This was very touching. I love the emotions in this and the words that you used were marvelous. Good job.
11les petits bateauxThis was very touching. I love the emotions in this and the words that you used were marvelous. Good job.
1/4/2006 c1 54SirenThird
That was so sweet! It gave me this sort of sad feeling in my stomach. I liked it alot! Good work! ^-^
54SirenThirdThat was so sweet! It gave me this sort of sad feeling in my stomach. I liked it alot! Good work! ^-^
1/3/2006 c1 879Moondog Dozier
Excellent. Very light and the flow is extraordinary. Lyrical, amazingly lyrical.
879Moondog DozierExcellent. Very light and the flow is extraordinary. Lyrical, amazingly lyrical.
1/2/2006 c1 19DiffusedBlues
I think that the angst works, but I think you're driving it in the wrong direction. This scratches the surface but doesn't go much further than that.
~Impressions of a leg
19DiffusedBluesI think that the angst works, but I think you're driving it in the wrong direction. This scratches the surface but doesn't go much further than that.
~Impressions of a leg
1/2/2006 c1 73Jezsh
so sad...really heartbreaking. I like the mix of thought and event, and the slight sense of mystery about what's happened between them.
73Jezshso sad...really heartbreaking. I like the mix of thought and event, and the slight sense of mystery about what's happened between them.
1/1/2006 c1 31none of burt's beeswax
At first, I thought this was a little cliché, but the ending makes it absolutely tragic. I love that it's not the way it appears. Gorgeous.
31none of burt's beeswaxAt first, I thought this was a little cliché, but the ending makes it absolutely tragic. I love that it's not the way it appears. Gorgeous.