for Thankyou6/7/2008 c1 This is not a name
Do you know me? Have you been peeking in my window? I know, everyone asks if you're their stalker if you write something that even sounds a little like them, but really and truely that does sound like me. I listened to hte same song repeatedly for 8 hours and 28 minutes straight, and dreaded every silence. I cried when my battery went dead.
I forgot to tell you that you are a very good writer and I have been reading all of your things. Which reminds me, will you have my babies?
Do you know me? Have you been peeking in my window? I know, everyone asks if you're their stalker if you write something that even sounds a little like them, but really and truely that does sound like me. I listened to hte same song repeatedly for 8 hours and 28 minutes straight, and dreaded every silence. I cried when my battery went dead.
I forgot to tell you that you are a very good writer and I have been reading all of your things. Which reminds me, will you have my babies?
2/21/2007 c1 
14Irony's.Last.Words.Were
I like this alot because I feel the same way about music. Powerfully written.
I've said this with another author, but I like your writing style because it's as few words as can be used to still make sense. It leaves more ground for the mind to run with, and it makes it easier to remember.
-Irony's.Last.Words.Were.
14Irony's.Last.Words.WereI like this alot because I feel the same way about music. Powerfully written.
I've said this with another author, but I like your writing style because it's as few words as can be used to still make sense. It leaves more ground for the mind to run with, and it makes it easier to remember.
-Irony's.Last.Words.Were.
10/8/2006 c1 19phantom-jedi
Burnt Bread
This short poem captures many of my own thoughts on music. Good job.
One possible mistake: is the line "makes more sense than text books hold" supposed to read "makes more sense than what text books hold"?
Other than my nit-pick, it is an enjoyable poem.
phantom_jedi
19phantom-jediBurnt Bread
This short poem captures many of my own thoughts on music. Good job.
One possible mistake: is the line "makes more sense than text books hold" supposed to read "makes more sense than what text books hold"?
Other than my nit-pick, it is an enjoyable poem.
phantom_jedi
3/19/2006 c1 29Livi Z
Simple, short, and I really like it. It's very true, I do that, the whole repeat thing.
Very nice style, I like it!
29Livi ZSimple, short, and I really like it. It's very true, I do that, the whole repeat thing.
Very nice style, I like it!
1/3/2006 c1 28fuzzy-logik21
Thank you for reviewing Beautiful Complexity, I was wondering if anyone was ever going to. :) I loved the poem, it was funny. I repeat songs way too much, results in a constans song stuck in the head feeling. Well, suppose it's my fault anyway.
Things to change: I wouldn't change much. I like it the way it is. You seem to have it flow pretty well, nice little rhyme to it. Why did I add this? Hmm.
28fuzzy-logik21Thank you for reviewing Beautiful Complexity, I was wondering if anyone was ever going to. :) I loved the poem, it was funny. I repeat songs way too much, results in a constans song stuck in the head feeling. Well, suppose it's my fault anyway.
Things to change: I wouldn't change much. I like it the way it is. You seem to have it flow pretty well, nice little rhyme to it. Why did I add this? Hmm.