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6/17/2006 c1 Black and White Dreams
This is so beautiful. I like it a lot! Beautiful, beautiful job.

~Black and White Dreams~
6/2/2006 c1 3Leo Eigenmann
Wow, nice expression of feelings and words you've got here. I can really relate to it This is really promising. Keep it up. Try checking out my works whenever you've got time.
3/9/2006 c1 148Thyrt
wowthis is really deepyou have good diction
1/27/2006 c1 612simpleplan13
beautiful.. the colors part was especially amazing.. i like descriptions too and the ending.. awesome job
1/21/2006 c1 breezy nostrils
sad, but breath-taking. the imagery is so beautiful. keep on going!
1/15/2006 c1 56from beneath the bell jar
That was soo incredibly beautiful and awe inspiring. Beautiful, beautiful piece.
1/13/2006 c1 5strummychick
lovely...you really are very good at poems
1/11/2006 c1 18Plinky
Wow, that's gorgeous. Really really lovely.

Beautiful ending. Keep writing!
1/9/2006 c1 31none of burt's beeswax
This has simply gorgeous imagery. Love it.
1/6/2006 c1 21Choke on this
so beautiful...love "surfing the dust drops" and last stanza
1/5/2006 c1 24frayedlifeforce
absolutely beautiful imagery, nice writing. i loved the first verse. wonderful work.
1/3/2006 c1 879Moondog Dozier
"surfing the dust drops", is a wonderful line. This really jumps out with color and feeling. It flows to the point of overflowing which is excellent because the work almost doesn't contain all the images used. This is a really great poem, well written and bursting with so much well placed emotion.
1/2/2006 c1 24Searching4Truth
Amazing poem. The imagery was so beautiful. I loved the dreamy emotion throughout. Excellent job. Keep writing, you're really good! :-)

P.S. Thank you for your nice review!
1/2/2006 c1 25cornered.sensations
simply beautiful...keep up the good work!
1/1/2006 c1 a lonely september
this was so beautiful, so incredible. each word practically fell out of heaven, it was all so perfect. honestly. amazing. i can't even pick cerain lines that i loved the most; it was all incredible.
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