for Dancing Lavender8/7/2009 c1 
1tonight we bloom
Wow: beautiful rhythm, imagery, and emotion all wrapped up into one poem. This is really good stuff.
I would love opinions from a writer like yourself on my work, it would mean a lot to me!
1tonight we bloomWow: beautiful rhythm, imagery, and emotion all wrapped up into one poem. This is really good stuff.
I would love opinions from a writer like yourself on my work, it would mean a lot to me!
2/3/2007 c1 44Rig Creon
are you kidding me I can't top reviews like that. :(
well... If I HAD to say something mean... It would most likely be...
She is spinning(,)
whirling(,)
twirling(,)
jj not really it would take away from a liberating well written poem. So keep at it
44Rig Creonare you kidding me I can't top reviews like that. :(
well... If I HAD to say something mean... It would most likely be...
She is spinning(,)
whirling(,)
twirling(,)
jj not really it would take away from a liberating well written poem. So keep at it
7/20/2006 c1 26autumn berrington
faeries is what comes to mind. i like how you used alot of nature in your poem.
~Autumn~
26autumn berringtonfaeries is what comes to mind. i like how you used alot of nature in your poem.
~Autumn~
4/6/2006 c1 11Werelynx
I like the subtle rhythm in this...
She is spinning
Whirling
Twirling
this is an awesome line. A great poem; keep writing!
11WerelynxI like the subtle rhythm in this...
She is spinning
Whirling
Twirling
this is an awesome line. A great poem; keep writing!
3/24/2006 c1 nofaceme
I liked this...kinda a nice picture in my head..sort of what you would expect for a drawing on a box of tea really. o_O lol good job.
I liked this...kinda a nice picture in my head..sort of what you would expect for a drawing on a box of tea really. o_O lol good job.
3/16/2006 c1 44Reed The Writer
i love how you describe her and how the world acts around her (or should i say the twigs :P). this reminds me of a series by terry brooks. its called the landover series and i think you would enjoy that very much. well done, you deserve a star *
44Reed The Writeri love how you describe her and how the world acts around her (or should i say the twigs :P). this reminds me of a series by terry brooks. its called the landover series and i think you would enjoy that very much. well done, you deserve a star *
3/4/2006 c1 69Around.about
Beautiful imagrey very nice. ever consider publication?
Wonderful job,
~Sejse~
69Around.aboutBeautiful imagrey very nice. ever consider publication?
Wonderful job,
~Sejse~
2/3/2006 c1 19Pink Sparrow
Oh this is so beautiful. The imagery and description was amazing. Nice work.
19Pink SparrowOh this is so beautiful. The imagery and description was amazing. Nice work.
2/1/2006 c1 128Annoying as Hell
Eep. This is really good too. Once again I love the imagery! Fantastic!
128Annoying as HellEep. This is really good too. Once again I love the imagery! Fantastic!