for Evan5/11/2006 c14 
7SarryMatts
Yay they kissed! Adam is going to take care of Evan - i am so happy about that. Still a good story, sorry about the lack of updates, i've barely been able to get on here.
7SarryMattsYay they kissed! Adam is going to take care of Evan - i am so happy about that. Still a good story, sorry about the lack of updates, i've barely been able to get on here.
5/7/2006 c14 25Esquirella
What's the deal with Ken? He seems to be jealous, but I'm not sure of whom.
25EsquirellaWhat's the deal with Ken? He seems to be jealous, but I'm not sure of whom.
5/6/2006 c14 19diebyownhands
what is up with Ken? I had a fear that I dono Ken some how knew Chris and Chris would ambush them at the restaurant or something...ah I dono where that came from...
but I am very suspicious of the guy
19diebyownhandswhat is up with Ken? I had a fear that I dono Ken some how knew Chris and Chris would ambush them at the restaurant or something...ah I dono where that came from...
but I am very suspicious of the guy
5/4/2006 c13 diebyownhands
Spleen, I actually looked it up because it's something that has been bugging me since I didn't exactly know what it was. I found out its and organ ( Iknew that) and it's function is not really known (yeah that helped).
Very very short but the promise off an update has made it ok :P
I have bit more time today and I wanted to mention that I would have loved for you to milk the whole Adam doesn't know the other guy beats me. But I guess you had your reason for him to find out when he did. Ijust think that Evan would have denied it a bit more.
Spleen, I actually looked it up because it's something that has been bugging me since I didn't exactly know what it was. I found out its and organ ( Iknew that) and it's function is not really known (yeah that helped).
Very very short but the promise off an update has made it ok :P
I have bit more time today and I wanted to mention that I would have loved for you to milk the whole Adam doesn't know the other guy beats me. But I guess you had your reason for him to find out when he did. Ijust think that Evan would have denied it a bit more.
5/4/2006 c13 25Esquirella
Can we see Chris get his ass kicked? Pretty please? He's an evil bastard! I don't care if he wasn't always that way! He is now, and that's all that matters. Hmm ... maybe Adam can arrange for a large piano to hit Chris, Roadrunner/Wyle E. Coyote-style! That would be cool, and fun for the kids, too!
25EsquirellaCan we see Chris get his ass kicked? Pretty please? He's an evil bastard! I don't care if he wasn't always that way! He is now, and that's all that matters. Hmm ... maybe Adam can arrange for a large piano to hit Chris, Roadrunner/Wyle E. Coyote-style! That would be cool, and fun for the kids, too!
4/30/2006 c12 19diebyownhands
oh! I'm glad I found this I've been looking for something good to read.
Don't take too long to update!
19diebyownhandsoh! I'm glad I found this I've been looking for something good to read.
Don't take too long to update!
4/30/2006 c12 Cherise
His boyfriend is one crazy bastard. He shreds his clothes, trashes his apartment, then beats his friends? What the hell.
His boyfriend is one crazy bastard. He shreds his clothes, trashes his apartment, then beats his friends? What the hell.
4/30/2006 c12 7SarryMatts
wow, you're like som ecrazy updating machine here, I log on after two days and there are thousands of chapters more (Yeah...i know that's an exageration)
I'm so happy to see adam and evan being all close and hugging, they better be the ones to live happily ever after and together. What hapened to Steve though? Was is chris and does the prat have something to do with Adam's case?
7SarryMattswow, you're like som ecrazy updating machine here, I log on after two days and there are thousands of chapters more (Yeah...i know that's an exageration)
I'm so happy to see adam and evan being all close and hugging, they better be the ones to live happily ever after and together. What hapened to Steve though? Was is chris and does the prat have something to do with Adam's case?
4/30/2006 c12 11Wolfie Star26
That was deffinitly Chris's doing...both times. The apartment and steve. Either that or Steve is really sick.
It was a wonderful chapter and well Adam and Evan's relationship is starting again, that's something to happy about. Update soon.
11Wolfie Star26That was deffinitly Chris's doing...both times. The apartment and steve. Either that or Steve is really sick.
It was a wonderful chapter and well Adam and Evan's relationship is starting again, that's something to happy about. Update soon.
4/30/2006 c12 4Never.Forgetten.Rememberance
It appears as Evan when I click it. Anyway, what happened? I really want to know. The case and what happened to Evan are connected in a way? Yeah, well, can't wait for the next update, so update agian soon, kay?
4Never.Forgetten.RememberanceIt appears as Evan when I click it. Anyway, what happened? I really want to know. The case and what happened to Evan are connected in a way? Yeah, well, can't wait for the next update, so update agian soon, kay?
4/27/2006 c11 11Wolfie Star26
Can I please beat that woman up? Or better yet throw her into a jail in Japan? I've never been able to tolerate people who drink...do drugs...and smoke around little kids. It just makes me pissed off.
Anyway, this chapter was wonderful and I can't wait to see how it all ties in. Is like Chris and this Pete guy friends? Probably not but that's as far as my detective skills will take me.
Keep up the wonderful work and update soon.
11Wolfie Star26Can I please beat that woman up? Or better yet throw her into a jail in Japan? I've never been able to tolerate people who drink...do drugs...and smoke around little kids. It just makes me pissed off.
Anyway, this chapter was wonderful and I can't wait to see how it all ties in. Is like Chris and this Pete guy friends? Probably not but that's as far as my detective skills will take me.
Keep up the wonderful work and update soon.