for Evan4/27/2006 c11 Cherise
Chris isn't the runaway bad guy is he? That would be so... twisting of the plot-ish. And how is Mr. I'm gonna beat the crap outta you going to react to his little boy toy up and leaving?
Chris isn't the runaway bad guy is he? That would be so... twisting of the plot-ish. And how is Mr. I'm gonna beat the crap outta you going to react to his little boy toy up and leaving?
4/26/2006 c10 
11Wolfie Star26
You put the chapters up so fast I don't even have time to read and review a chapter when a new one is up. It's good that you update so fast but I do like leaving reviews.
Haha, I did love the last few chapters thought. I'm glad that Adam is there and is going to help Evan. It makes me a hell of a lot better. I like knowing that Adam is going to help Evan get away from Chris. It makes me so happy. Keep up the wonderful work and update soon.
-Jade
11Wolfie Star26You put the chapters up so fast I don't even have time to read and review a chapter when a new one is up. It's good that you update so fast but I do like leaving reviews.
Haha, I did love the last few chapters thought. I'm glad that Adam is there and is going to help Evan. It makes me a hell of a lot better. I like knowing that Adam is going to help Evan get away from Chris. It makes me so happy. Keep up the wonderful work and update soon.
-Jade
4/25/2006 c10 25Esquirella
Can we have a chapter of Adam snapping Chris like a twig? That would be uber awesome!
25EsquirellaCan we have a chapter of Adam snapping Chris like a twig? That would be uber awesome!
4/24/2006 c9 4Never.Forgetten.Rememberance
lol, I don't like it when people leave me a cliff and then I like to leave cliffs of my own. Anyway I can't wait to see what Adam does to Chris. Hope it's something equally mean to what Chris did to Evan. Oh, well... Can't wait for the next update!
4Never.Forgetten.Rememberancelol, I don't like it when people leave me a cliff and then I like to leave cliffs of my own. Anyway I can't wait to see what Adam does to Chris. Hope it's something equally mean to what Chris did to Evan. Oh, well... Can't wait for the next update!
4/24/2006 c9 7SarryMatts
oh, i'm looking forward to seeing Adam beat the living daylights out of chris. Poor Evan, I feel so bad for him. Can't wait for more ^_^
7SarryMattsoh, i'm looking forward to seeing Adam beat the living daylights out of chris. Poor Evan, I feel so bad for him. Can't wait for more ^_^
4/24/2006 c9 Vroniruh
I love you *sigh*
You just made my day =)
And no cliffy...you learn fast *g*, although I must admit, they are fun and keep the readers addicted =P
Tschüss
I love you *sigh*
You just made my day =)
And no cliffy...you learn fast *g*, although I must admit, they are fun and keep the readers addicted =P
Tschüss
4/24/2006 c9 25Esquirella
Chris was doing this long before Adam came back into his life, wasn't he? I mean Adam hadn't even come back yet and Evan was leaving the hospital with a broken arm, so Adam wasn't the catalyst.
25EsquirellaChris was doing this long before Adam came back into his life, wasn't he? I mean Adam hadn't even come back yet and Evan was leaving the hospital with a broken arm, so Adam wasn't the catalyst.
4/23/2006 c8 7SarryMatts
I feel bad that I kept missing your updates and pretty disapointed in my observation skills as I did miss quite a few.
The story is getting better, Chris is still an annoying bastard but Adam is there to save the day now so everything should get better. Amy was a bit harsh about Evan's situation,. sure, he did mess up and that but he's suffered more than enough by chris because of it.
Can't wait for more ^_^
7SarryMattsI feel bad that I kept missing your updates and pretty disapointed in my observation skills as I did miss quite a few.
The story is getting better, Chris is still an annoying bastard but Adam is there to save the day now so everything should get better. Amy was a bit harsh about Evan's situation,. sure, he did mess up and that but he's suffered more than enough by chris because of it.
Can't wait for more ^_^
4/23/2006 c8 4Never.Forgetten.Rememberance
You had to leave it there? That's going to drive me crazy now, lol. Can't wait for your next update...
4Never.Forgetten.RememberanceYou had to leave it there? That's going to drive me crazy now, lol. Can't wait for your next update...
4/23/2006 c8 Vroniruh
Oh my goodness, you can´t keep me hanging like this!by the way, I adore your story *g*
That is really really evil of you. Now I won´t be able to concentrate on anything ´cause my thoughts will be on the cliffy...
Hope you rescue me ;-D
Oh my goodness, you can´t keep me hanging like this!by the way, I adore your story *g*
That is really really evil of you. Now I won´t be able to concentrate on anything ´cause my thoughts will be on the cliffy...
Hope you rescue me ;-D
4/20/2006 c7 11Wolfie Star26
So will he answer? Believe me if this happened to a friend of mine and I knew about it the abuser would already be kind of 'dead'. Hehe, though it probably wouldn't look very good if a police officer killed someone...That's also there because of Adam. He is a FBI agent and all. Wait is it FBI or did I get that mixed up?
Anyway, this was a wonderful chapter. I loved it apart from the abusing. Amy was right, it isn't just about Evan.
Keep up the great work.
11Wolfie Star26So will he answer? Believe me if this happened to a friend of mine and I knew about it the abuser would already be kind of 'dead'. Hehe, though it probably wouldn't look very good if a police officer killed someone...That's also there because of Adam. He is a FBI agent and all. Wait is it FBI or did I get that mixed up?
Anyway, this was a wonderful chapter. I loved it apart from the abusing. Amy was right, it isn't just about Evan.
Keep up the great work.
4/19/2006 c7 25Esquirella
Now Adam will see it all! And Chris will feel some pain for a change. Right?
25EsquirellaNow Adam will see it all! And Chris will feel some pain for a change. Right?
4/19/2006 c6 11Wolfie Star26
Well I have to admit I've read some of the works by Esquirella. but really only the ones with Rio until I read this and after that I started to read her other work.
Anyway, this was a wonderful chapter. We finally hear the history about those two. Well some of the history anyway. the father not accepting is kind of cliched as is the mother accepting but I can't really complain. It always works.
Your doing a wonderful job and I feel the need to tell you of another author who does some wonderful M/M relationships. Chances are you may already read this work, but I might as well tell you anyway, Darkladyknight. I love Finding Heaven the best out of all of the stories.
-Jade
11Wolfie Star26Well I have to admit I've read some of the works by Esquirella. but really only the ones with Rio until I read this and after that I started to read her other work.
Anyway, this was a wonderful chapter. We finally hear the history about those two. Well some of the history anyway. the father not accepting is kind of cliched as is the mother accepting but I can't really complain. It always works.
Your doing a wonderful job and I feel the need to tell you of another author who does some wonderful M/M relationships. Chances are you may already read this work, but I might as well tell you anyway, Darkladyknight. I love Finding Heaven the best out of all of the stories.
-Jade
4/19/2006 c6 25Esquirella
And now Adam's going to investigate Chris and beat the crap out him ... right? *blinks hopefully*
25EsquirellaAnd now Adam's going to investigate Chris and beat the crap out him ... right? *blinks hopefully*
4/12/2006 c5 Esquirella
These cliffies are bad for me, you know. *pouts*
Good set up chapter. Get to the Adam stuff!
These cliffies are bad for me, you know. *pouts*
Good set up chapter. Get to the Adam stuff!