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12/30/2005 c1 2nightdragon0
Definitely an interesting one!

Besides looking at their physical differences, it's interesting to see how the very 'innocent' dragon and this more hardened Dracis interact.
12/30/2005 c1 3Forsakn
This is beautiful! More than worthy of being in one of those anthologies, I bet. Just watch your grammar; you slip up a little at times. I just LOVE this story. But I hate the ending. Couldn't it have been a bit happier?

The way you described the dragon was fantastic, too. The elder dragon, I mean.. The Dracis are wonderful. And how nature is never disgusting.. and eating worm slime for water.. It was interesting, to say the least. I did think Aganon could have been slightly more child-like, but that's just me.

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