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2nightdragon0
Definitely an interesting one!
Besides looking at their physical differences, it's interesting to see how the very 'innocent' dragon and this more hardened Dracis interact.
2nightdragon0Definitely an interesting one!
Besides looking at their physical differences, it's interesting to see how the very 'innocent' dragon and this more hardened Dracis interact.
12/30/2005 c1 3Forsakn
This is beautiful! More than worthy of being in one of those anthologies, I bet. Just watch your grammar; you slip up a little at times. I just LOVE this story. But I hate the ending. Couldn't it have been a bit happier?
The way you described the dragon was fantastic, too. The elder dragon, I mean.. The Dracis are wonderful. And how nature is never disgusting.. and eating worm slime for water.. It was interesting, to say the least. I did think Aganon could have been slightly more child-like, but that's just me.
3ForsaknThis is beautiful! More than worthy of being in one of those anthologies, I bet. Just watch your grammar; you slip up a little at times. I just LOVE this story. But I hate the ending. Couldn't it have been a bit happier?
The way you described the dragon was fantastic, too. The elder dragon, I mean.. The Dracis are wonderful. And how nature is never disgusting.. and eating worm slime for water.. It was interesting, to say the least. I did think Aganon could have been slightly more child-like, but that's just me.