for Is This It6/21/2006 c1 
23firestar267
This is really good, i like it! I love how you used the word please, i think it gave urgency to the poem which added to its effect. You summed the feelings up really well, well done and keep it up.
23firestar267This is really good, i like it! I love how you used the word please, i think it gave urgency to the poem which added to its effect. You summed the feelings up really well, well done and keep it up.
4/10/2006 c1 36Ella-Watson
wow.. that is one poem. i can tell it came from the heart. but if you faked it, then well done. this poem is great!
36Ella-Watsonwow.. that is one poem. i can tell it came from the heart. but if you faked it, then well done. this poem is great!
1/30/2006 c1 41sarah1491
You are such a good writer, don't say in your profile that they are terrible cause they're SO not!
41sarah1491You are such a good writer, don't say in your profile that they are terrible cause they're SO not!
12/30/2005 c1 31button-nose
Im afraid so..this is it! I really felt your emoiton in this, great job...
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31button-noseIm afraid so..this is it! I really felt your emoiton in this, great job...
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