for What Can You Do To Help Me?1/30/2006 c1 
41sarah1491
Ooh! Very nice! I like how you bolded the answer to the title's question. The italicized text is very interesting as well. :D
41sarah1491Ooh! Very nice! I like how you bolded the answer to the title's question. The italicized text is very interesting as well. :D
12/31/2005 c1 5charisrain
"Be a light when my world goes dark
Pull me back when I get too close to the edge
Remind me which way is up when all I see is down
Hold me tighter when I try to push you away"
...my breathing missed a beat after reading your words.
although it seemed like a dark piece at first - i found it was strangely uplifting by the end.
5charisrain"Be a light when my world goes dark
Pull me back when I get too close to the edge
Remind me which way is up when all I see is down
Hold me tighter when I try to push you away"
...my breathing missed a beat after reading your words.
although it seemed like a dark piece at first - i found it was strangely uplifting by the end.
12/30/2005 c1 14aaidenkae
first off. in your profile you bashed your poems. DONT! you can have your opionion about your stuff. i used be super down about the stuff i wrote and before i read it to someone id always tell them that it was so bad or something. but then an experienced author i know told me not to she said that she wanted to draw her own conclusions about my work. let your readers draw their own conclusions about yours. dont tell us what to think. this poem was really good actually. i really liked the part about keeping you together as your falling to pieces. it was grand. thank you-kae
14aaidenkaefirst off. in your profile you bashed your poems. DONT! you can have your opionion about your stuff. i used be super down about the stuff i wrote and before i read it to someone id always tell them that it was so bad or something. but then an experienced author i know told me not to she said that she wanted to draw her own conclusions about my work. let your readers draw their own conclusions about yours. dont tell us what to think. this poem was really good actually. i really liked the part about keeping you together as your falling to pieces. it was grand. thank you-kae