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90Dragonzz
I think this poem is about suicide. Duh. The way the first line is just makes the rest of it seem like suicide. That's what I think anyway... Good job with this! Most haikus I read on this site are sappy.
~dragonzz~
90DragonzzI think this poem is about suicide. Duh. The way the first line is just makes the rest of it seem like suicide. That's what I think anyway... Good job with this! Most haikus I read on this site are sappy.
~dragonzz~
12/31/2005 c1 CKShorty
o_o really powerful and emotional. i loved it
CK
o_o really powerful and emotional. i loved it
CK
12/31/2005 c1 alice
o.. suicidal.. so either ur killing urself or killing whoever's causing you the pain... it's really powerful... nice job and happy new years ^^
o.. suicidal.. so either ur killing urself or killing whoever's causing you the pain... it's really powerful... nice job and happy new years ^^
12/30/2005 c1 2Lady of Fire and Ice
Um, I know a great psyciatrist...
JK, but it does sound a little disturbing and very sad. However, it shows a lot of feeling for so few words.
2Lady of Fire and IceUm, I know a great psyciatrist...
JK, but it does sound a little disturbing and very sad. However, it shows a lot of feeling for so few words.
12/30/2005 c1 24Tr APeze-sWiNGer
At first I automatically thought, "suicide." But now I'm not so sure. Maybe pulling the trigger is just an allusion to the actual act of letting chaos overflow. I'm not completely sure, but I like this. I'd be interested to know what your origional idea was.
24Tr APeze-sWiNGerAt first I automatically thought, "suicide." But now I'm not so sure. Maybe pulling the trigger is just an allusion to the actual act of letting chaos overflow. I'm not completely sure, but I like this. I'd be interested to know what your origional idea was.
12/30/2005 c1 11Awekid
Well, when I read it, the first thing that ran through my mind was a gun. So if I contemplate it a little more thoroughly. It could mean your patience.
11AwekidWell, when I read it, the first thing that ran through my mind was a gun. So if I contemplate it a little more thoroughly. It could mean your patience.
12/30/2005 c1 47Pimpled Boy
Are you a soldier? Or a policeman? I'm not really sure what exactly is happening...
47Pimpled BoyAre you a soldier? Or a policeman? I'm not really sure what exactly is happening...
12/30/2005 c1 mysterious-footprints
Hmm... this is a good poem. I can see what you mean by this poem possibly having two different stories. My first thought was that this person was murdering someone. But then I thought that he/she could be commiting suicide. Still, I like the content of the poem itself.
Hmm... this is a good poem. I can see what you mean by this poem possibly having two different stories. My first thought was that this person was murdering someone. But then I thought that he/she could be commiting suicide. Still, I like the content of the poem itself.