Just In
for Invasion

12/30/2005 c1 DeliriousInsanity
Very powerful emotions here, a lot of people can easliy relate to this as almost at one point or another, or maybe their whole lives, mothers invade their kids privacy. A delightful read. BTW, when I meant delightful, I don't mean that the anger you feel is delightful, just the story. Lols.
12/30/2005 c1 4Tikvah Ariel
The last line kind of ruined the ending. You had a peice that a lot of people could of related to, and I thought that if you took more time to look at the character's mothers motives then it would of been more powerful.

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