for Dream Dude5/16/2006 c4 Unknown.woman
Hey I love the idea of your story but I want to know what happens so you just HAVE TO keep going. Today is May 15, 2006 and I noticed that you last updated on Valentine's Day... Please Please Please keep going. I know how hard it is to keep going sometimes but you have a good plot, just a little more detail and you are good to go! Please keep going
Hey I love the idea of your story but I want to know what happens so you just HAVE TO keep going. Today is May 15, 2006 and I noticed that you last updated on Valentine's Day... Please Please Please keep going. I know how hard it is to keep going sometimes but you have a good plot, just a little more detail and you are good to go! Please keep going
3/1/2006 c4 
9Tsukage
GO U!...uh...well it turns out i did read this...i just forgot to r&r...IM SO SORRY SORA!...hehe...ill see ya later?...yea how can i not...we live on the same island, village, go to the same school, homeroom, and i think that just about covers it...again...PLEASE FORGIVE ME I WAS SO STUPID TO FORGET TO REVIEW FOR THIS STORY!...and ill be waiting for the next chappie 0_0...still waiting...
9TsukageGO U!...uh...well it turns out i did read this...i just forgot to r&r...IM SO SORRY SORA!...hehe...ill see ya later?...yea how can i not...we live on the same island, village, go to the same school, homeroom, and i think that just about covers it...again...PLEASE FORGIVE ME I WAS SO STUPID TO FORGET TO REVIEW FOR THIS STORY!...and ill be waiting for the next chappie 0_0...still waiting...
2/20/2006 c4 1Dirty Secret
Ooh! I see some BIIG romance coming up! :D.
You actually had dreams of a guy that you didn't know about and the guy had the same dreams too? COOL! You MUST be psychic or something...
1Dirty SecretOoh! I see some BIIG romance coming up! :D.
You actually had dreams of a guy that you didn't know about and the guy had the same dreams too? COOL! You MUST be psychic or something...
2/19/2006 c1 Tyra Kaelar
Liked how you started it off, and the intersecting dreams should offer you lots of rope to play with. I look forward to seeing where you go with this story.
Liked how you started it off, and the intersecting dreams should offer you lots of rope to play with. I look forward to seeing where you go with this story.
2/14/2006 c4 1Twinkle Star Bell
This story isn't the greatest. You seem to have a lot of potential as an author. The way you word things a lot of times they come out on paper looking and sounding awkward. So you could work on that and also some of the realism is a little off. Like the characters reactions seem over dramatic or underdramatic. I really do like you story I just am trying to give some consturtive crticism. It has a good plot idea and I like the characters. Update soon! Glad your wrist was only bruised!
1Twinkle Star BellThis story isn't the greatest. You seem to have a lot of potential as an author. The way you word things a lot of times they come out on paper looking and sounding awkward. So you could work on that and also some of the realism is a little off. Like the characters reactions seem over dramatic or underdramatic. I really do like you story I just am trying to give some consturtive crticism. It has a good plot idea and I like the characters. Update soon! Glad your wrist was only bruised!
2/14/2006 c4 8Out-Spoken-Runaway
O_O
Amazing story! Hah, if I were that guy who had a drink spilt on me, I would've screamed my ass off. Except the guy would have to be a girl. Anyways, I'm rambling. Keep writing!
XxFallingxX
8Out-Spoken-RunawayO_O
Amazing story! Hah, if I were that guy who had a drink spilt on me, I would've screamed my ass off. Except the guy would have to be a girl. Anyways, I'm rambling. Keep writing!
XxFallingxX
2/10/2006 c3 1Dirty Secret
Ouch. Broken wrist...I know how you feel...I broke my collarbone once, hurt like hell. ANyways, sorry for reviewing so late! The second chapter was fantabulous! Absolutely awesome! I hope your wrists gets better and when it does, UPDATE!
1Dirty SecretOuch. Broken wrist...I know how you feel...I broke my collarbone once, hurt like hell. ANyways, sorry for reviewing so late! The second chapter was fantabulous! Absolutely awesome! I hope your wrists gets better and when it does, UPDATE!
1/23/2006 c3 zam
Aww... I don hope you get better soon! I love your story though. It's refreshing coz it doesn't seem like it's going to be heavily laced with angst. I do hope you won't give up on this. Thanks!
Aww... I don hope you get better soon! I love your story though. It's refreshing coz it doesn't seem like it's going to be heavily laced with angst. I do hope you won't give up on this. Thanks!
1/3/2006 c1 30Sarah Rizal
Hey, really great story! do your best! Carry on you should definately continue.
30Sarah RizalHey, really great story! do your best! Carry on you should definately continue.
12/31/2005 c1 1Dirty Secret
Wow, great start to what I think will be an awesome story! I think you should continue it ...so...UPDATE SOON!
1Dirty SecretWow, great start to what I think will be an awesome story! I think you should continue it ...so...UPDATE SOON!