for Dance To My Rhythm1/22/2006 c1 
10Chaco
i can't believe myself. D: i read this like 2 weeks ago, and i still haven't reviewed it!
so, here you go. :]
i like the poem. i love the metaphors you used. and i like how it shows a lot of imagery. i actually saw a dancer in my mind when i was reading it today!
10Chacoi can't believe myself. D: i read this like 2 weeks ago, and i still haven't reviewed it!
so, here you go. :]
i like the poem. i love the metaphors you used. and i like how it shows a lot of imagery. i actually saw a dancer in my mind when i was reading it today!
1/8/2006 c1 8A-wolf-called-Skya
nicely done! were a few coma errors, and pause errors, but other than that. . . .reminds of life. especially the last line "dance with two ends". it definitely reminds me of lfe ^^
goodwriting!
-Rachel.
8A-wolf-called-Skyanicely done! were a few coma errors, and pause errors, but other than that. . . .reminds of life. especially the last line "dance with two ends". it definitely reminds me of lfe ^^
goodwriting!
-Rachel.