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9/5/2010 c2 33FLIPPER66
you've got to continue this i begging of you ya its just that good in my opinion
6/3/2006 c2 Boardriders
hey! this is actually a pretty good story

and why haven't you updated for so long? please don't tell me you're gonna abandon this story, I really like it.
1/30/2006 c2 35Cool-Ruzz
Oh wow, she is such a dramatic brat but I love her nevertheless. Seriously, she is so bitchy but fun at the same time that its so hard not to be friends with her. If I was in the same school with her, no doubt I'll be trying really hard to be her friend. Its not to be more popular or anything, it just seems like being with her, you'll always have a great time. Am I right?

In other words, everyone goes through break ups. But I guess Marissa is so perfect that she never had to go through a bad time in her otherwise perfect life.

I love the way you write. You seem so intelligent and all that I envy you so much. Keep up the good work girlfriend!

Love, love, Ruzz
1/24/2006 c1 9springish
Heehee, very interesting. It's not often that you get the point of view of the cheerleader. Usually, they're just painted as these total meanies, but it's nice to get a refreshing perspective.

Hehe, liked this line:

…I blanked and looked at his slight smile. “…You want to read Cosmo with me?”

*thumbs up*
1/13/2006 c2 manda
LOSER!

luv this more than ur other 1 :p

update update update! But make sure u still hav tym 4 mee :D

btw marissa sounds almost wayy 2 familiar..*ahem* sophie b anyone? ahha!

kisses mandii
1/11/2006 c2 1a moo
fun fun fun..

love Riss, really good character.. i always find writing self obsessed characters easier and more fun..
1/11/2006 c2 lucy
aww i feel sorry for marissa :(

lol she's so overdramatic tho. I liked this chapter a lot more since it was way more interesting!

Update soon!
1/10/2006 c2 2KaiaLeigh
I like your story so far. I hope things get better for Riss soon. The only spelling/grammer type thing I noticed is that you're spelling realize wrong.
1/10/2006 c1 KaiaLeigh
What a depressing beginning, aww.
1/10/2006 c2 19Nyte Shade
Aww...poor Riss. I feel so sorry for her. She seems so pityful. But this was written so good. Drew seems so mean but its understandable. Keep up the good work
1/10/2006 c2 lilith's heir
haha i see. anger management. i really liked your new chapter, very funny. riss is just... epic. i don't know if it is because i sometimes behave like a drama queen, but i'm siding with her in this lol.
1/10/2006 c2 Ms.Romantic
thankyou and LOVE IT
1/10/2006 c2 Meg
This is really funny! It's really cool that you decided to do the 'other' side to the story of jock meets nerd and they fall in love and he dumps his cheerleader gf. it's looking at those stories from a completely ignored angle! :D hope to see more of it soon
1/10/2006 c2 6Agent Raindrop
hehe. Great story, I love how Riss is so dramatic. I love the story so far and can't wait to meet the brother, I love the way this is written because yeah, its Riss and she's a cheerleader and I love the way she thinks! hehe. Update soon!
1/10/2006 c2 15butterfly-touch
hey. I love your story so far. I think Marissa is awesome and that Drew is a total prude. I can't wait till his brother comes in. Update soon!
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