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9/13/2006 c1 871no.peace.los.angeles
What a cool little poem. I especially like "side street brawl" and the rhyming and flow of this piece. Nice work. Keep writing! :)
8/19/2006 c1 hey maria
Really good short poems are hard to write; you can put a few lines together and call it a poem, but that doesn't mean it has any power or meaning in it. But this does. The rhythm was lovely and so was the meaning. This is going on my favorites.
4/20/2006 c1 20Autumn Dance
Really powerful. Good rhyme and signature. I think the way it's been laid out- it's almost like you the reader's not really meant to care about anything else but the words and that's a clever and frivolous way of doing it. Your layout is perfect. x
4/18/2006 c1 281ThisCut-UpAngel
Short and straight to the point. I love it!
1/23/2006 c1 236mezzie
this is really cool. short but very complete, good flow, comprehensive image.

1/7/2006 c1 a lonely september
...wow... normally i'm not one for rhyming, but this is amazing, the emotion swept it away. the last line was amazing, wonderful. : )
1/2/2006 c1 7AeroSea
Very well done sir. I can see it all in my mind.
1/2/2006 c1 37philod
you did well capturing the emotion. i could picture that perfectly
1/2/2006 c1 78myheartiswaypastbeating
Good poem, I like it, well done.

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