
11/28/2007 c1
8Dancing4Jesus
Wow.
This seems like a poem I want to read again and again so I can fully understand it.
I feel like reading it once was not enough, like I just brushed the surface.
I like it.

Wow.
This seems like a poem I want to read again and again so I can fully understand it.
I feel like reading it once was not enough, like I just brushed the surface.
I like it.
2/2/2006 c1
35Daffodil Elizabeth
Wow. I loved this! The description was great and I loved the message.

Wow. I loved this! The description was great and I loved the message.
1/31/2006 c1
879Moondog Dozier
Wow. The sound in this is wonderful. Great work. It really creates a vividity that stays with the reader.

Wow. The sound in this is wonderful. Great work. It really creates a vividity that stays with the reader.
1/6/2006 c1
64Arwen Starfire
Beautiful poem. The rhythm is really catchy. Did you mean to spell jewel "jewell", or was that a mistake?
p.s. thnx for the review

Beautiful poem. The rhythm is really catchy. Did you mean to spell jewel "jewell", or was that a mistake?
p.s. thnx for the review
1/2/2006 c1
5Hope Blackthorne
Wow. This was really beautiful. I liked the rhyme scheme and that last line gave me a little shivery feeling.

Wow. This was really beautiful. I liked the rhyme scheme and that last line gave me a little shivery feeling.
1/2/2006 c1
88Icthoid Matro Coselos
I like how you took nearly unconnected things and tied them so close to your point. You did a good job. I like it. I also like the rhyme scheme, it works well. Good poem. I like it! keep writing.

I like how you took nearly unconnected things and tied them so close to your point. You did a good job. I like it. I also like the rhyme scheme, it works well. Good poem. I like it! keep writing.