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11/28/2007 c1 8Dancing4Jesus
Wow.

This seems like a poem I want to read again and again so I can fully understand it.

I feel like reading it once was not enough, like I just brushed the surface.

I like it.
5/10/2006 c1 1Nataku Lee Snipe
That's more rhymeing than I can do. I like its simple little truth.
2/2/2006 c1 35Daffodil Elizabeth
Wow. I loved this! The description was great and I loved the message.
1/31/2006 c1 879Moondog Dozier
Wow. The sound in this is wonderful. Great work. It really creates a vividity that stays with the reader.
1/21/2006 c1 102backseats on thursdays
Beautiful imagery.
1/6/2006 c1 64Arwen Starfire
Beautiful poem. The rhythm is really catchy. Did you mean to spell jewel "jewell", or was that a mistake?

p.s. thnx for the review
1/2/2006 c1 5Hope Blackthorne
Wow. This was really beautiful. I liked the rhyme scheme and that last line gave me a little shivery feeling.
1/2/2006 c1 Curiousfallenangel
thats really good! ^^
1/2/2006 c1 hunnybee4
i like it.
1/2/2006 c1 1Ash Mah Kash
I LIKE IT! NICE VOCABULARY! SRRY I DONT KNOW Y I AM TYPING IN CAPS!
1/2/2006 c1 88Icthoid Matro Coselos
I like how you took nearly unconnected things and tied them so close to your point. You did a good job. I like it. I also like the rhyme scheme, it works well. Good poem. I like it! keep writing.

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