
8/27/2010 c1
4Engx
I realy hope that doesn't happen in lingerie stores either. XD It was all very hot and I loved, loved, loved your description of Duncan's eyes. *sigh* Very sexy. ;) Both names of the main characters mean darkness right? Coincidence? :o

I realy hope that doesn't happen in lingerie stores either. XD It was all very hot and I loved, loved, loved your description of Duncan's eyes. *sigh* Very sexy. ;) Both names of the main characters mean darkness right? Coincidence? :o
7/18/2010 c1 anon
wow that was totally hot!
wow that was totally hot!
7/29/2009 c1
2Night's-Freedom
HEY!
This story was awesome... and pretty damn funny aswell lol.
I'm gonna have a look at your toher stories now I think :)
Have a gd week!
BYE!
x x x

HEY!
This story was awesome... and pretty damn funny aswell lol.
I'm gonna have a look at your toher stories now I think :)
Have a gd week!
BYE!
x x x
6/17/2009 c1 janree
It's written that Kiera isn't shocked that Duncan is "arrogant, stubborn, bull-headed or persistent" but is shocked by the fact that he's still chasing after her even with the knowledge that she has a "fiance". But wouldn't that make him "arrogant, stubborn, bull-headed [and] persistent"?
I don't want to get technical, but just something I noticed.
Great one-shot though, really enjoyed the mixes of humour and passion. =)
It's written that Kiera isn't shocked that Duncan is "arrogant, stubborn, bull-headed or persistent" but is shocked by the fact that he's still chasing after her even with the knowledge that she has a "fiance". But wouldn't that make him "arrogant, stubborn, bull-headed [and] persistent"?
I don't want to get technical, but just something I noticed.
Great one-shot though, really enjoyed the mixes of humour and passion. =)
2/25/2009 c1
9StoryPictures
Perfectly Flawless underwear and all. =) I Loved it. Can I have a Duncan?

Perfectly Flawless underwear and all. =) I Loved it. Can I have a Duncan?
12/7/2008 c1 Mo
Okay I read the story again and thought it was new...yes for a future doc, i dont have a good memory..but eh I'll hire Anne. Anyways if i thought it was new, it deserved a new review. So I wana try that lingere now if I can get that rxn! Awesome one shot!
Okay I read the story again and thought it was new...yes for a future doc, i dont have a good memory..but eh I'll hire Anne. Anyways if i thought it was new, it deserved a new review. So I wana try that lingere now if I can get that rxn! Awesome one shot!
6/18/2008 c1 DELETEDELETELDELETEDELETE
From outside the fitting room, a woman’s voice exclaimed, “I’ll buy whatever she was trying on!”
Priceless! LMFAO! My favorite part! I loved this alot, thank you :]
From outside the fitting room, a woman’s voice exclaimed, “I’ll buy whatever she was trying on!”
Priceless! LMFAO! My favorite part! I loved this alot, thank you :]
5/26/2008 c1 AMM3485
I want whatever she's trying on hahaha. i absolutely loved this, it was way to hilarious. Great oneshot!
I want whatever she's trying on hahaha. i absolutely loved this, it was way to hilarious. Great oneshot!