for Beating the Game4/29/2010 c18 blackblasphemy
Now I cannot decide who I like more, from a girl's point of view. Patrick or Marielle.
I absolutely enjoyed, adored and was probably the best piece of fiction both published and online I've recently read.
I like how they constantly keep playing games with each other, and WHY DID YOU HAVE TO STOP WHEN THINGS WERE GETTING GOOD.
Lastly, I think I like Patrick from a totally shallow girl's point of view. Hot, charming, and intelligent to boot.
PS. UPDATE. It's been 2 YEARS.
Now I cannot decide who I like more, from a girl's point of view. Patrick or Marielle.
I absolutely enjoyed, adored and was probably the best piece of fiction both published and online I've recently read.
I like how they constantly keep playing games with each other, and WHY DID YOU HAVE TO STOP WHEN THINGS WERE GETTING GOOD.
Lastly, I think I like Patrick from a totally shallow girl's point of view. Hot, charming, and intelligent to boot.
PS. UPDATE. It's been 2 YEARS.
4/27/2010 c1 teodark45
please tell me you are continuing this story, it's great and i really want to read at least one more chapter.
please tell me you are continuing this story, it's great and i really want to read at least one more chapter.
4/19/2010 c18 AwesomeFakeNames
even though I only discovered the story recently, I've been addicted to it from the first chapter. Love everything about the story, but, when is a new chapter going to come out? please update soon!
even though I only discovered the story recently, I've been addicted to it from the first chapter. Love everything about the story, but, when is a new chapter going to come out? please update soon!
2/15/2010 c9 Delilah
my GOD i love this story
the more i read, the more addicted i get
you make everything seem so realistic and believable
it is so fascinating
my GOD i love this story
the more i read, the more addicted i get
you make everything seem so realistic and believable
it is so fascinating
2/15/2010 c2 Genevieve
loved the idea
its so original :)
Patricks a bit depressive though i guess there would not be much of a story if he were not
anyways its really really interesting
loved the idea
its so original :)
Patricks a bit depressive though i guess there would not be much of a story if he were not
anyways its really really interesting
2/14/2010 c18 WithEveryReason
Ugh, why did I even both reading this story.
You never update. It's pointless. Man, I hate authors on this site that do that to people.
It's so friggin annoying, oh well.
Thanks for the good unfinished read anyways.
Ugh, why did I even both reading this story.
You never update. It's pointless. Man, I hate authors on this site that do that to people.
It's so friggin annoying, oh well.
Thanks for the good unfinished read anyways.
2/7/2010 c18 
1RoxyCupcake
What happens next? Are you ever going to finish this story? I love it btw :)
1RoxyCupcakeWhat happens next? Are you ever going to finish this story? I love it btw :)
1/26/2010 c18 Darklinger
So you haven't updated for a while... But I still have hope. Not that you need one more nagging review... But. I love the story. And it would be a huge waste if it was never finished. I absolutely respect that you may not want to write more now or for months onward... But I'll still be eagerly anticipating the next chapter, because I know it'll be worth it.
So you haven't updated for a while... But I still have hope. Not that you need one more nagging review... But. I love the story. And it would be a huge waste if it was never finished. I absolutely respect that you may not want to write more now or for months onward... But I'll still be eagerly anticipating the next chapter, because I know it'll be worth it.
1/16/2010 c1 12D0ll
This makes me your 1013 eview (I'm so jello btw) But anyway I think this story is so clever and it's not so simple, which I appreciate. I thought that he would have just became the new it boy and they would have fallen in love. But this is way darker and more complex. There are twists with the mind gmes and complexities. Shes more complex then what I originally thought. I felt real bad for Dereck, nice guys finish last rite, 8( . I would like to see you write more stories and update. But I'm not one to judge *guilty looks* . And the last thing is, let's see, G0 0rioles! (my brother likes them)
12D0llThis makes me your 1013 eview (I'm so jello btw) But anyway I think this story is so clever and it's not so simple, which I appreciate. I thought that he would have just became the new it boy and they would have fallen in love. But this is way darker and more complex. There are twists with the mind gmes and complexities. Shes more complex then what I originally thought. I felt real bad for Dereck, nice guys finish last rite, 8( . I would like to see you write more stories and update. But I'm not one to judge *guilty looks* . And the last thing is, let's see, G0 0rioles! (my brother likes them)
1/11/2010 c18 1EstrellaPedwar
You've confused me thoroughly with your characters and their mind games. I'm sure it gives you great personal satisfaction knowing that :) Patrick is... in cheerleader words, I suppose, never having met a cheerleader, kind of hot. Well he's cool and the computer genius thing is different. And a guy writing a story on FictionPress is very different. But you're one of the best I've read, so YAY :D I hope you remember the existence of this story soon- it's been almost two years. Sigh.
1EstrellaPedwarYou've confused me thoroughly with your characters and their mind games. I'm sure it gives you great personal satisfaction knowing that :) Patrick is... in cheerleader words, I suppose, never having met a cheerleader, kind of hot. Well he's cool and the computer genius thing is different. And a guy writing a story on FictionPress is very different. But you're one of the best I've read, so YAY :D I hope you remember the existence of this story soon- it's been almost two years. Sigh.
1/9/2010 c18 nooooooooooooooooooooooooooope
oh my gosh i absolutely adore this story! just the tension between patrick and marielle is fabulous! keep up the good work and PLEASE update soon! (:
oh my gosh i absolutely adore this story! just the tension between patrick and marielle is fabulous! keep up the good work and PLEASE update soon! (:
1/7/2010 c18 nonsenescent
I just began-and finished-this story. It's the first I've read of yours, and I. Am. Impressed. You haven't updated in something like a year though! Looking forward to the next chapter, whenever it comes. :)
I just began-and finished-this story. It's the first I've read of yours, and I. Am. Impressed. You haven't updated in something like a year though! Looking forward to the next chapter, whenever it comes. :)