for Beating the Game2/21/2012 c18 
2RoadLessTraveledBy
This story is not only one of the best that I have every read on fp ever, but it is also the first that I've seen that's written by a guy. I didn't even know that they had those here on fictionpress :)
I'm so upset that this hasn't been updated in years because truth is, it amazing and I really really want to find out what happens. If you ever have any free time, you should consider updating it
Shine on,
Fase
2RoadLessTraveledByThis story is not only one of the best that I have every read on fp ever, but it is also the first that I've seen that's written by a guy. I didn't even know that they had those here on fictionpress :)
I'm so upset that this hasn't been updated in years because truth is, it amazing and I really really want to find out what happens. If you ever have any free time, you should consider updating it
Shine on,
Fase
2/11/2012 c2 Kiara
I'm loving the story this far, I hope it continues as amusing as this ;)
I'm loving the story this far, I hope it continues as amusing as this ;)
1/3/2012 c1 1NeonTime
I don't understand most of the authors who whine and run off to some hilariously "safe" place. As if some dick stealing from them will be taught a lesson by… being forced to steal from someone else who isn't popular enough to get into fancy Livejournal communities. Publish or perish (where perish = understand basic realities of the shit show that is the net).
Ah well. It was a lovely story. Thanks for letting the peons read some of it.
1NeonTimeI don't understand most of the authors who whine and run off to some hilariously "safe" place. As if some dick stealing from them will be taught a lesson by… being forced to steal from someone else who isn't popular enough to get into fancy Livejournal communities. Publish or perish (where perish = understand basic realities of the shit show that is the net).
Ah well. It was a lovely story. Thanks for letting the peons read some of it.
12/17/2011 c18 7drats
oh wow. you should have seen my face! I scrolled down to click into the next chapter... but there was no next chapter to click onto!
ohh the horror!
but i actually really like this story, it seemed a bit repetitive at the start, the same thoughts circling his head, but I see why that was necessary. The thing I liked most however, was probably how you managed to capture Pat analysing every movement and labelling it as something, when the rest of the human world would just see it as an instinctual move - that is if they were even looking for something in the first place. It really gave me a different view on life in general in some aspects. so yeah, good job. :)
7dratsoh wow. you should have seen my face! I scrolled down to click into the next chapter... but there was no next chapter to click onto!
ohh the horror!
but i actually really like this story, it seemed a bit repetitive at the start, the same thoughts circling his head, but I see why that was necessary. The thing I liked most however, was probably how you managed to capture Pat analysing every movement and labelling it as something, when the rest of the human world would just see it as an instinctual move - that is if they were even looking for something in the first place. It really gave me a different view on life in general in some aspects. so yeah, good job. :)
12/16/2011 c18 hawt
Even though you haven't updated I am pleased with this chapter. Your brain is mind blowing, the way you write should be recognized. I love this story.
Even though you haven't updated I am pleased with this chapter. Your brain is mind blowing, the way you write should be recognized. I love this story.
12/4/2011 c18 llama828
Oh my godd!
this story is amazing and im left in suspense! I need to know what happens! Please finish this story as soon as possible please!:D
I love Patrick! keep up the good work!
Oh my godd!
this story is amazing and im left in suspense! I need to know what happens! Please finish this story as soon as possible please!:D
I love Patrick! keep up the good work!
11/23/2011 c18 1Lonnee
Patrick is an AWESOME character! I loved how you formatted a "nerd" as you will, into a kind of jokish type, but not really. Very nicely done! Continue soon please!
1LonneePatrick is an AWESOME character! I loved how you formatted a "nerd" as you will, into a kind of jokish type, but not really. Very nicely done! Continue soon please!
11/15/2011 c18 Sara
Ugh, there is a reason I don't usually read stories like yours. You get to the last chapter and you get that awful feeling because the author has not completed his wonderfully amazing story. So please, do update soon so others don't go through that awful experience. :)
Ugh, there is a reason I don't usually read stories like yours. You get to the last chapter and you get that awful feeling because the author has not completed his wonderfully amazing story. So please, do update soon so others don't go through that awful experience. :)
11/5/2011 c18 kumbly
The worst place possible to leave this off.
The worst place possible to leave this off.
11/5/2011 c11 kumbly
What happened to I'm really going to finish this story? Tsk tsk tsk
What happened to I'm really going to finish this story? Tsk tsk tsk
10/30/2011 c18 blythely
woo! are you ever gonna finish this? i hope so. the suspense is killing me. finally, a romance from a guy's pov. and not just any guy, but PATRICK MORRISON, super smart and more than slightly paranoid. he has to be one of the most interesting characters on this site.
woo! are you ever gonna finish this? i hope so. the suspense is killing me. finally, a romance from a guy's pov. and not just any guy, but PATRICK MORRISON, super smart and more than slightly paranoid. he has to be one of the most interesting characters on this site.
10/7/2011 c18 8Emerald123
I found your story through SKOW and I got hooked. But seeing that you haven't updated in 3 years.. do you plan to finish?
8Emerald123I found your story through SKOW and I got hooked. But seeing that you haven't updated in 3 years.. do you plan to finish?
10/4/2011 c18 Anonymous
Damn this was awesome. Such a shame you dropped it though ;_;
Damn this was awesome. Such a shame you dropped it though ;_;