for On a Rainly Day2/20 c1 emmanoah1969
Your story is amazing, and your characters truly well-written I'm really excited to transform your idea into a comic! Let's get in touch; my contact information is below
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Your story is amazing, and your characters truly well-written I'm really excited to transform your idea into a comic! Let's get in touch; my contact information is below
Contact Details
Email: emmanoah1969 at gmail dot com
Emmanoah333 on Discord
4/3/2009 c1 
14Kittalian
Ha. This startled me at first, the way uo explained "useless people" and such. But all in all it was very well done!
14KittalianHa. This startled me at first, the way uo explained "useless people" and such. But all in all it was very well done!
5/3/2007 c1 14Irony's.Last.Words.Were
I thought this was good, though I think that you could have changed the wording with "...countless of faceless..." It was a little awkward and I had to read the sentence again.
Other than that, this was very good. I liked it alot.
Always,
Irony
14Irony's.Last.Words.WereI thought this was good, though I think that you could have changed the wording with "...countless of faceless..." It was a little awkward and I had to read the sentence again.
Other than that, this was very good. I liked it alot.
Always,
Irony
7/4/2006 c1 50pixieofdarkness
this is really intersting. an ew fresh take on things, i liek it very much.
50pixieofdarknessthis is really intersting. an ew fresh take on things, i liek it very much.
7/3/2006 c1 7Teufel66
Hey again, Bread. Words cannot describe how strange - yet amazing - this story is! I absolutely love the speaker...her attitude & thoughts are very amusing, to say the least. The story as a whole is wonderful; the ending leaves the readers thinking. While reading the story, I couldn't help but wonder how it will end. & no questions asked, the ending brought a smile to my face and at the same time partly creeped me out. In a good way, of course.
Oh, & I could not forget the Mercedes line! Haha, that gave me a chuckle. Oh and the umbrella! I liked the umbrella! It gave the speaker a unique personality seeing how she's so attentive about something so (seemingly) minor. Well done in creating such a fascinating story and a one of a kind character.
-Tuefel
7Teufel66Hey again, Bread. Words cannot describe how strange - yet amazing - this story is! I absolutely love the speaker...her attitude & thoughts are very amusing, to say the least. The story as a whole is wonderful; the ending leaves the readers thinking. While reading the story, I couldn't help but wonder how it will end. & no questions asked, the ending brought a smile to my face and at the same time partly creeped me out. In a good way, of course.
Oh, & I could not forget the Mercedes line! Haha, that gave me a chuckle. Oh and the umbrella! I liked the umbrella! It gave the speaker a unique personality seeing how she's so attentive about something so (seemingly) minor. Well done in creating such a fascinating story and a one of a kind character.
-Tuefel
1/17/2006 c1 8Ephemeral Dreams
Very interesting. I like your extra information at the bottom too; it's good to know that you know your material.
- E.D.
8Ephemeral DreamsVery interesting. I like your extra information at the bottom too; it's good to know that you know your material.
- E.D.
1/6/2006 c1 Ahemait
first your title says 'rainly'. i relaly liked the authors note you had at the bottom. this was a cool story, i liked it. your girl reminds me of my own story. anyway, it was good and i thiknk you should continue it, even if you said you probably wouldnt
first your title says 'rainly'. i relaly liked the authors note you had at the bottom. this was a cool story, i liked it. your girl reminds me of my own story. anyway, it was good and i thiknk you should continue it, even if you said you probably wouldnt
1/3/2006 c1 Sheflows
I like the description in this story and its interesting to see this kind of story from a girl's P.O.V. This is an excellent one-shot but it could be a great story too. *nudge-nudge* Great job.
I like the description in this story and its interesting to see this kind of story from a girl's P.O.V. This is an excellent one-shot but it could be a great story too. *nudge-nudge* Great job.