for Unlikely Attraction8/28/2010 c12 
6Classy Broad
Aww this has to be the cutest poem I've ever read here in fictionpress and trust me high school cliches are not my usual dig but I was grinning the whole time I read this. The poems passed between Callum and Andrea and her boyfriend are nice, clever and well characterized :D
The ending was cute... I'm going daw :D
6Classy BroadAww this has to be the cutest poem I've ever read here in fictionpress and trust me high school cliches are not my usual dig but I was grinning the whole time I read this. The poems passed between Callum and Andrea and her boyfriend are nice, clever and well characterized :D
The ending was cute... I'm going daw :D
5/19/2010 c12 Quin
Awwmigoodness that was so sweet! It was adorable...
Awwmigoodness that was so sweet! It was adorable...
12/2/2009 c12 13Aruka Ten
you know wat would be a great little end end chapter? if Andrea and Callum ended up together, Callum could right Andrea a little poem like 30 years later when they might be having married troubles or whatever, and then they fall head over heels for each other again. so, that was just a suggestion. great poems :D
~Aruka Ten
13Aruka Tenyou know wat would be a great little end end chapter? if Andrea and Callum ended up together, Callum could right Andrea a little poem like 30 years later when they might be having married troubles or whatever, and then they fall head over heels for each other again. so, that was just a suggestion. great poems :D
~Aruka Ten
8/1/2009 c12 Brenda Agaro
This is clever and well written. Love the rhyming and literary devices. Great imagery and characterization.
This is clever and well written. Love the rhyming and literary devices. Great imagery and characterization.
4/18/2009 c11 13IFightWithInk
A reply I admit I didn't expect
Though I regard it with much respect
Your poems were not corny at all
In fact they actually did enthrall!
I do not mind the use of a site
Your poems were better than I could write
Cliches and humor, poetry and love
And so much more than all of the above
Anyways thank you again, I just had to reply
After all this rhyming I'll just say good bye.
13IFightWithInkA reply I admit I didn't expect
Though I regard it with much respect
Your poems were not corny at all
In fact they actually did enthrall!
I do not mind the use of a site
Your poems were better than I could write
Cliches and humor, poetry and love
And so much more than all of the above
Anyways thank you again, I just had to reply
After all this rhyming I'll just say good bye.
4/17/2009 c12 IFightWithInk
Ah man I'm jealous, your rhymes are amazing,
The funny metaphors and perfect phrasing
And to put a great story into your rhyme?
Your ability to do that should be a crime
Truly my actual rhymes really do suck
The ones I have done are completely pure luck.
Yeah my rhymes really do bite
I had to use a stupid rhyme site!
But you? Geez, your skills do impress
How you do it I can only guess
You rhymes are funny, completely unflawed
So there's only one thing to do, raise my hands and applaud
Ah man I'm jealous, your rhymes are amazing,
The funny metaphors and perfect phrasing
And to put a great story into your rhyme?
Your ability to do that should be a crime
Truly my actual rhymes really do suck
The ones I have done are completely pure luck.
Yeah my rhymes really do bite
I had to use a stupid rhyme site!
But you? Geez, your skills do impress
How you do it I can only guess
You rhymes are funny, completely unflawed
So there's only one thing to do, raise my hands and applaud
2/8/2008 c12 2Dorkie
Okay this is definitely my favorite... I can see this being like a short movie or something, with the poems being recited or whatever.
Just thought I'd say that.
~Aubrey
2DorkieOkay this is definitely my favorite... I can see this being like a short movie or something, with the poems being recited or whatever.
Just thought I'd say that.
~Aubrey
12/3/2006 c12 125kenansense
Haha...that was really interesting. And unique. And the jock's poem was funny. Good work!
125kenansenseHaha...that was really interesting. And unique. And the jock's poem was funny. Good work!
10/30/2006 c12 16Cheeseraptor5
Aw, that was the sweetest epic poem I've ever read... you truly have a gift with poetry, and the cute little story you told was perfectly portrayed in your style. In fact, if it hadn't been told through your (very well written) series of love poems, the story honestly wouldn't have been as engaging. Great work with this.
16Cheeseraptor5Aw, that was the sweetest epic poem I've ever read... you truly have a gift with poetry, and the cute little story you told was perfectly portrayed in your style. In fact, if it hadn't been told through your (very well written) series of love poems, the story honestly wouldn't have been as engaging. Great work with this.
10/18/2006 c12 5psychedelicangel
God, that was amazing! So original and creative. Great job; I've never read anything like it.
5psychedelicangelGod, that was amazing! So original and creative. Great job; I've never read anything like it.