for Unlikely Attraction5/7/2006 c7 Written
Here I was, very impressed with your poetry SKILLZ and good sense for humor, when you write this chapter, and I'm just awed. This is the most original thing on fp. I take back all the times I've said it to other writers, really. This is the best.
And gosh, if I only had a poet admirer.
Here I was, very impressed with your poetry SKILLZ and good sense for humor, when you write this chapter, and I'm just awed. This is the most original thing on fp. I take back all the times I've said it to other writers, really. This is the best.
And gosh, if I only had a poet admirer.
5/4/2006 c12 
34poet tree
This. Is. So. Cute.
This is now going to be what I read when I come home feeling like shit because this is a happy series of poems. Heck yes.
34poet treeThis. Is. So. Cute.
This is now going to be what I read when I come home feeling like shit because this is a happy series of poems. Heck yes.
4/20/2006 c12 31poemkitten7
Omg, I just read the whole thing and decided to give you this one big review rather than twelve short ones. I assume it would be easier for you. ^_^ But anyways, back to your poems. They're so beautifully and thoughtfully written. They're all SO good. I love the rhyming. Your series of poems were both romantic and funny. They seem very realistic, too. I can really see this happening. The last one (12) got me all teary-eyed. I absolutely LOVED the last two sentences in the very last poem. Obviously, I mean come on, who wouldn't? I'm adding this to my favorites. Thanks for making my day. Keep writing! :)
31poemkitten7Omg, I just read the whole thing and decided to give you this one big review rather than twelve short ones. I assume it would be easier for you. ^_^ But anyways, back to your poems. They're so beautifully and thoughtfully written. They're all SO good. I love the rhyming. Your series of poems were both romantic and funny. They seem very realistic, too. I can really see this happening. The last one (12) got me all teary-eyed. I absolutely LOVED the last two sentences in the very last poem. Obviously, I mean come on, who wouldn't? I'm adding this to my favorites. Thanks for making my day. Keep writing! :)
4/11/2006 c12 1Rikki Hyperion
I don't normally dig romance, or poetry. But damn, I really love this - I giggled and cheered and celebrated at the end. You've got a really solid grasp on creating real human beings with actual personalities - you know, as opposed to a collection of boring stereotypes. (I think your story's the only one I've read on FP where the "jock boyfriend" isn't a complete jerk/bully/idiot/egotist/et cetera. Thank you!)
And all in rhyming couplets? That's a challenge if I ever saw one. Color me impressed, with this one and your other stuff. Please, feel free to continue the awesome. :D
1Rikki HyperionI don't normally dig romance, or poetry. But damn, I really love this - I giggled and cheered and celebrated at the end. You've got a really solid grasp on creating real human beings with actual personalities - you know, as opposed to a collection of boring stereotypes. (I think your story's the only one I've read on FP where the "jock boyfriend" isn't a complete jerk/bully/idiot/egotist/et cetera. Thank you!)
And all in rhyming couplets? That's a challenge if I ever saw one. Color me impressed, with this one and your other stuff. Please, feel free to continue the awesome. :D
3/17/2006 c12 1mothling
I read all of the chapters but didn't want to stop reading to review. A captivating story! I loved this.
1mothlingI read all of the chapters but didn't want to stop reading to review. A captivating story! I loved this.
2/28/2006 c12 23Erimenthy
*Drools(Again)* That was HAWT. I loved it! and the ending was definitly cute! *Adds story to favorites*
23Erimenthy*Drools(Again)* That was HAWT. I loved it! and the ending was definitly cute! *Adds story to favorites*
2/28/2006 c12 daydreamer
Really enjoyed this. Liked all the poems and liked the ending although it must have been quite a lunch break when a popular girl randomly reads a poem to everyone declaring her love. Most probably blinked hard and been like 'er,whateva'.I really wish u could branch off into another rythming tale with differnt people from where u left off.I've been reading fiction online for like 4yrs but really aren't into poetry so his was a real fun treat. Pls recommend so good similar ones on ur page.
Really enjoyed this. Liked all the poems and liked the ending although it must have been quite a lunch break when a popular girl randomly reads a poem to everyone declaring her love. Most probably blinked hard and been like 'er,whateva'.I really wish u could branch off into another rythming tale with differnt people from where u left off.I've been reading fiction online for like 4yrs but really aren't into poetry so his was a real fun treat. Pls recommend so good similar ones on ur page.
2/4/2006 c12 64Samara-chan
"Come up here and kiss me." AHAHA that was adorable! What hilarious poetry xD You are SO good! Excellent ending!
64Samara-chan"Come up here and kiss me." AHAHA that was adorable! What hilarious poetry xD You are SO good! Excellent ending!
2/2/2006 c12 pocket.mouse.poppet
That was too cute. 'Okay, fuckers, put down your sandwiches'. Callum is awesome. I just want to find him, and then kiss him, but then I would be a complete bitch for trying to break up him and Andrea. I must try to remember that he is only a story. Just a story. It's okay, breathe...
Hey, He's a story that I named. I've just always liked the name Callum... BAD. I will stop thinking about attractive Prince Charmings. It's just a story.
Okay, whatever. I suppose I'd better go and see your profile page now.
Shinies To All!
That was too cute. 'Okay, fuckers, put down your sandwiches'. Callum is awesome. I just want to find him, and then kiss him, but then I would be a complete bitch for trying to break up him and Andrea. I must try to remember that he is only a story. Just a story. It's okay, breathe...
Hey, He's a story that I named. I've just always liked the name Callum... BAD. I will stop thinking about attractive Prince Charmings. It's just a story.
Okay, whatever. I suppose I'd better go and see your profile page now.
Shinies To All!
2/1/2006 c12 6Orion Demasecus
Good to know that when i'm sad i can always remember that you owe me hot sex. I just hope you remember that lol, jk. Anyways it was a nice sweet ending, and i am really excited for your next story/piece of writing.
6Orion DemasecusGood to know that when i'm sad i can always remember that you owe me hot sex. I just hope you remember that lol, jk. Anyways it was a nice sweet ending, and i am really excited for your next story/piece of writing.