for Unlikely Attraction2/1/2006 c12 Venustasiaceo
Holy carp! (and yes, I meant carp.)
That's so cute. Yay for the come up and kiss me. That's definitely a cute way to say "Yes!" to a proposal of being together that I wouldn't of thought of.
Though... the "Okay, fuckers, put down you sandwiches!" makes me think of a mobster holding up a highschool cafeteria. "I want the pickles, now, bitches, and your lunch money if you broughtz it!"
Yup.
Holy carp! (and yes, I meant carp.)
That's so cute. Yay for the come up and kiss me. That's definitely a cute way to say "Yes!" to a proposal of being together that I wouldn't of thought of.
Though... the "Okay, fuckers, put down you sandwiches!" makes me think of a mobster holding up a highschool cafeteria. "I want the pickles, now, bitches, and your lunch money if you broughtz it!"
Yup.
2/1/2006 c12 theloveshinesinyoureyes
well i have to say this was done with great skill and is a great read... i love this whole thing...
well i have to say this was done with great skill and is a great read... i love this whole thing...
2/1/2006 c12 
31none of burt's beeswax
Aww, happy, sticky sweetness. Andrea does a pretty awesome thing with that last poem. It's cute.
31none of burt's beeswaxAww, happy, sticky sweetness. Andrea does a pretty awesome thing with that last poem. It's cute.
2/1/2006 c12 8Sketchor
Anything different from a "cute ending" would've made me mad so I'm glad you went with this one. =) And now we can assume they live happily ever after.
It was an awesome "poem-story" and I can only wonder what you'll come up with next.
BTW...I *will* remember...:D
Have a nice day and stay pretty. (b^_^)b
8SketchorAnything different from a "cute ending" would've made me mad so I'm glad you went with this one. =) And now we can assume they live happily ever after.
It was an awesome "poem-story" and I can only wonder what you'll come up with next.
BTW...I *will* remember...:D
Have a nice day and stay pretty. (b^_^)b
1/30/2006 c11 6Orion Demasecus
Oh the suspense, it makes me so...so...i don't know what it makes me, but it makes me something.
6Orion DemasecusOh the suspense, it makes me so...so...i don't know what it makes me, but it makes me something.
1/30/2006 c10 Orion Demasecus
lol, the rhymes in this chapter amused me. keep it up, and i'm also very interested by your idea for a song-fic.
lol, the rhymes in this chapter amused me. keep it up, and i'm also very interested by your idea for a song-fic.
1/30/2006 c4 Orion Demasecus
Wow, her attitude just totally changed. Almost seems like the change was a little forced, oh well.
Wow, her attitude just totally changed. Almost seems like the change was a little forced, oh well.
1/30/2006 c3 Orion Demasecus
They're at each other's throats, lol. More i shal read. Oh and if my stuff appears to be taking a while that's because i am stuck on daunting trials and i have certain difficulties writing No Chance, which will be made very clear once i post my next chapter, which i am done by the way but i just need to ask my friend a few questions about it before i post it.
They're at each other's throats, lol. More i shal read. Oh and if my stuff appears to be taking a while that's because i am stuck on daunting trials and i have certain difficulties writing No Chance, which will be made very clear once i post my next chapter, which i am done by the way but i just need to ask my friend a few questions about it before i post it.
1/30/2006 c2 Orion Demasecus
Sorry i haven't read your stuff recently but i've been absent from writing/reading for quite some time so yeah. Anyways i kinda like this and i plan on reading more.
Sorry i haven't read your stuff recently but i've been absent from writing/reading for quite some time so yeah. Anyways i kinda like this and i plan on reading more.