for Unlikely Attraction1/29/2006 c11 
31none of burt's beeswax
Ok, well, I am very glad she pointed out that Callum is really a bit of a jerk mixing insults & compliments. I don't know what I want. I want Andrea to be with a nice guy, but I think that's a big of a stretch. I can see why she is going for Callum, but in a way, it does seem a little reboundish. But who says those kinds of relationships are all bad? Well, I can't wait to see what happens. I almost feel like Callum is going to be like "OH, YES," but then that makes me think you'll make him say "NO" just to surprise us. Hm...definitely it's time to think
31none of burt's beeswaxOk, well, I am very glad she pointed out that Callum is really a bit of a jerk mixing insults & compliments. I don't know what I want. I want Andrea to be with a nice guy, but I think that's a big of a stretch. I can see why she is going for Callum, but in a way, it does seem a little reboundish. But who says those kinds of relationships are all bad? Well, I can't wait to see what happens. I almost feel like Callum is going to be like "OH, YES," but then that makes me think you'll make him say "NO" just to surprise us. Hm...definitely it's time to think
1/29/2006 c11 10just a teardrop
lol i've just read the other 10 chapters - great work! i wonder whats going to happen!
10just a teardroplol i've just read the other 10 chapters - great work! i wonder whats going to happen!
1/28/2006 c11 8Sketchor
"Time to use your brain" Hopefully that brain is well connected to Callum's heart. I think he'll make the right choice. ;) Update soon.
8Sketchor"Time to use your brain" Hopefully that brain is well connected to Callum's heart. I think he'll make the right choice. ;) Update soon.
1/27/2006 c11 pocket.mouse.poppet
Yes! Yesyesyes! But could it really be happening? Will they make the right choices? what could possibly happen next? Will Callum use his brains? Will Andrea abdicate her throne as queen of the school? God I hope you don't die before you post the next chapter... You're not ill are you?
Shinies To All!
Yes! Yesyesyes! But could it really be happening? Will they make the right choices? what could possibly happen next? Will Callum use his brains? Will Andrea abdicate her throne as queen of the school? God I hope you don't die before you post the next chapter... You're not ill are you?
Shinies To All!
1/26/2006 c10 gonegone
When I read the first lot of poems, I was like, ok, I'll see where this goes . . . and then I couldn't stop reading! lol
It's clever, addictive, true to the age and dispite the stereotypes highly original. Great work! ^_^
Cassie
When I read the first lot of poems, I was like, ok, I'll see where this goes . . . and then I couldn't stop reading! lol
It's clever, addictive, true to the age and dispite the stereotypes highly original. Great work! ^_^
Cassie
1/25/2006 c10 8Sketchor
XD This chapter was hilarious. BTW, crows are ugly. Ravens are the cooler black birds. =p
I wonder if a conrontation of sorts will happen...update soon!
8SketchorXD This chapter was hilarious. BTW, crows are ugly. Ravens are the cooler black birds. =p
I wonder if a conrontation of sorts will happen...update soon!
1/25/2006 c10 pocket.mouse.poppet
Thinks with his cock, huh? Thus the slang term cockhead, which could certainly do a lot more to describe him than any of Andrea's words to Callum on the subject of her boyfriend...
In fact, he appears to have condemned himself there and then. It looks as though he cut and pasted the words on the end of every line out of a rhyming dictionary. Either that or he just kept writing until he found a word that rhymed with the end of the previous line. The topic also pretty much gives him away as a crude asshole, in the fact that he continually deviates from the worshipping serenade of his girlfriend to a poem about how getting the girl with the cute ass makes his ego swell, along with other parts of his anatomy.
I wonder if he's cheating on her. I don't think I'd put it past him, actually...
Shinies To All!
Thinks with his cock, huh? Thus the slang term cockhead, which could certainly do a lot more to describe him than any of Andrea's words to Callum on the subject of her boyfriend...
In fact, he appears to have condemned himself there and then. It looks as though he cut and pasted the words on the end of every line out of a rhyming dictionary. Either that or he just kept writing until he found a word that rhymed with the end of the previous line. The topic also pretty much gives him away as a crude asshole, in the fact that he continually deviates from the worshipping serenade of his girlfriend to a poem about how getting the girl with the cute ass makes his ego swell, along with other parts of his anatomy.
I wonder if he's cheating on her. I don't think I'd put it past him, actually...
Shinies To All!
1/24/2006 c10 31none of burt's beeswax
Ahh, why does he have to be such an idiot? I wanted to love him, but maybe this whole thing is based on misconceptions. I am just like Andrea, totally blinded, but one thing's for sure, this poetry speaks of something besides a good father with even better biceps. He says he doesn't want to be crude or lewd or rude, but dear god, I cringed when I read it.
31none of burt's beeswaxAhh, why does he have to be such an idiot? I wanted to love him, but maybe this whole thing is based on misconceptions. I am just like Andrea, totally blinded, but one thing's for sure, this poetry speaks of something besides a good father with even better biceps. He says he doesn't want to be crude or lewd or rude, but dear god, I cringed when I read it.
1/24/2006 c10 93Venustas iaceo
Callum S. SHOOD? ...Shood!
Holy crap. (I'm definitely guessing that one's on purpose.)
Okay. This seems to be to Andrea from the boyfriend, right? ... 'Cause I'm thinkin' he's a dumbass and a half.
93Venustas iaceoCallum S. SHOOD? ...Shood!
Holy crap. (I'm definitely guessing that one's on purpose.)
Okay. This seems to be to Andrea from the boyfriend, right? ... 'Cause I'm thinkin' he's a dumbass and a half.
1/24/2006 c10 2Lightning Storm
WOW! Big bad boyfriend is aggressive. Can't wait to read the next edition.
2Lightning StormWOW! Big bad boyfriend is aggressive. Can't wait to read the next edition.
1/24/2006 c9 31none of burt's beeswax
Ah, this is sad even though I like Andrea's boyfriend because he is just cool like that. I feel like Callum is just too sweet to pass up a friendship with. I don't want them to stop writing poetry to each other, and I want it to be their thing. Although if my boyfriend was writing poetry to another girl, I think that would be a bit awkward. Hm...oh, the dilema.
31none of burt's beeswaxAh, this is sad even though I like Andrea's boyfriend because he is just cool like that. I feel like Callum is just too sweet to pass up a friendship with. I don't want them to stop writing poetry to each other, and I want it to be their thing. Although if my boyfriend was writing poetry to another girl, I think that would be a bit awkward. Hm...oh, the dilema.