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11/13/2006 c1 463All Alone With Her Thoughts
Beautiful, beautiful job. So full of emotion and meaning.

Thanks for the review.

6/23/2006 c1 86Isis lives
WOWOWOW! that is one amazing poem, i love the way that you use words that wouldn't noramlly be found near each other to great effect. The line: 'Reflecting and multiplying in the chasm of memory' jumped out at me, the way that it rolls off the tongue sounds amazing! keep this up please!

Keep writing, as always,


6/10/2006 c1 19Astana
I enjoyed this poem, especially the lines: "Emotions scream in lightsReflecting and multiplying in the chasm of memory"-very vivid details, well done!
1/3/2006 c1 Ajna
A poem about dreams? Beautifully done, I like the way you describe things and the way you think. Lovely piece. :)

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