for Behind Closed Lids11/13/2006 c1 
463All Alone With Her Thoughts
Beautiful, beautiful job. So full of emotion and meaning.
Thanks for the review.
~Rowan~
463All Alone With Her ThoughtsBeautiful, beautiful job. So full of emotion and meaning.
Thanks for the review.
~Rowan~
6/23/2006 c1 86Isis lives
WOWOWOW! that is one amazing poem, i love the way that you use words that wouldn't noramlly be found near each other to great effect. The line: 'Reflecting and multiplying in the chasm of memory' jumped out at me, the way that it rolls off the tongue sounds amazing! keep this up please!
Keep writing, as always,
Isis
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86Isis livesWOWOWOW! that is one amazing poem, i love the way that you use words that wouldn't noramlly be found near each other to great effect. The line: 'Reflecting and multiplying in the chasm of memory' jumped out at me, the way that it rolls off the tongue sounds amazing! keep this up please!
Keep writing, as always,
Isis
x
6/10/2006 c1 19Astana
I enjoyed this poem, especially the lines: "Emotions scream in lightsReflecting and multiplying in the chasm of memory"-very vivid details, well done!
19AstanaI enjoyed this poem, especially the lines: "Emotions scream in lightsReflecting and multiplying in the chasm of memory"-very vivid details, well done!
1/3/2006 c1 Ajna
A poem about dreams? Beautifully done, I like the way you describe things and the way you think. Lovely piece. :)
A poem about dreams? Beautifully done, I like the way you describe things and the way you think. Lovely piece. :)