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1/9/2006 c1 25cornered.sensations
This has never happened to me, but i enjoyed it anyway, it flowed so easily.
1/5/2006 c1 20Infection
this was wonderful. had a good rhytm and rhyme.
1/4/2006 c1 he said she said she forgot her password
Doesn't really flow well for me, though it rhymes nicely, =) really like the attempt to rhyme ("Oh, I will still miss them "so"") and also like how the poem is a whole and seems closed. Complete, nicely structured poem, like the linking of thoughts of how to say goodbye. (though for me i think its missing the whole disconnected feeling/melancholy of graduation)
1/4/2006 c1 8Twenty Nine
Happy new year to you too.
1/3/2006 c1 Ajna
Wonderful poem, I loved reading it! The rhyming makes it so fun. :)
1/3/2006 c1 michellleeee poopy
yay!nay!

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