for Happy New Year2/14/2006 c1 
51Confused-Mind
You've managed to make a poem with such a depressing subject come out beautiful, which is definately saying a lot for the subject. You have a way with using the right words and our wonderful with imagery. Great Job.
51Confused-MindYou've managed to make a poem with such a depressing subject come out beautiful, which is definately saying a lot for the subject. You have a way with using the right words and our wonderful with imagery. Great Job.
2/9/2006 c1 Ahemait
i understand the titel, duh, but it seemed after...boring, for lack of a better term, in comparison with the poem, whihc was very good. great work
i understand the titel, duh, but it seemed after...boring, for lack of a better term, in comparison with the poem, whihc was very good. great work
1/6/2006 c1 117xHannahx
huh, i got with someone at newyear - scarily similar. i like this, its very poetic (well duh..) hope u know what i mean.
Han.
117xHannahxhuh, i got with someone at newyear - scarily similar. i like this, its very poetic (well duh..) hope u know what i mean.
Han.
1/4/2006 c1 Rosanna28
Hey ya alex! This is so beautiful, it really gave me sort of a sad feeling inside. Which isnt a bad thing or anything, but yeah. Very cooL poem, loved the last stanza and we'll talk soon!
Much love, Rosanna.
Hey ya alex! This is so beautiful, it really gave me sort of a sad feeling inside. Which isnt a bad thing or anything, but yeah. Very cooL poem, loved the last stanza and we'll talk soon!
Much love, Rosanna.
1/4/2006 c1 298Moon-Chaser
Sounds creepy, scary and out of comtrol. It was very well written and described though. Email me if you want to talk. \
Keep it up.
298Moon-ChaserSounds creepy, scary and out of comtrol. It was very well written and described though. Email me if you want to talk. \
Keep it up.
1/3/2006 c1 115HauntedMisery
Wow, just wow, this is so powerful and creepy but in a good way, excellent piece
115HauntedMiseryWow, just wow, this is so powerful and creepy but in a good way, excellent piece
1/3/2006 c1 6Kira06
Wow that was really great! The guy not so great...but i really liked this and thanks for the reviews.
6Kira06Wow that was really great! The guy not so great...but i really liked this and thanks for the reviews.
1/3/2006 c1 3Eskelant
That was really good. I loved how the poem flowed and it wasn't choppy at all. Maybe you could read some of my poetry? I need to get it off my other computer, but I do have an unfinished story up that you could check out. ^.^ Again, even though I don't comment often I read your poetry everytime a mew peom comes out!
3EskelantThat was really good. I loved how the poem flowed and it wasn't choppy at all. Maybe you could read some of my poetry? I need to get it off my other computer, but I do have an unfinished story up that you could check out. ^.^ Again, even though I don't comment often I read your poetry everytime a mew peom comes out!
1/3/2006 c1 dancingintherain
something sweet yet tragic about this...the rythm though is definite, and its very beautiful...nice job!
something sweet yet tragic about this...the rythm though is definite, and its very beautiful...nice job!
1/3/2006 c1 124in theory
Hey! It's been ages and ages and ages and ages! Hope you had good holidays, and a happy new year to ya. This is stunning, so sharp with bright emotion and surprising lines.
124in theoryHey! It's been ages and ages and ages and ages! Hope you had good holidays, and a happy new year to ya. This is stunning, so sharp with bright emotion and surprising lines.
1/3/2006 c1 89Lady DreamWriter
Wow, not the best way to begin the new year is it? This guy really sounds like a real jerk. I hope the new year gets better for you! keep your head held high, cause you've got the talent!
89Lady DreamWriterWow, not the best way to begin the new year is it? This guy really sounds like a real jerk. I hope the new year gets better for you! keep your head held high, cause you've got the talent!