
5/29/2012 c1 Vaydric
Good story, a nice light read and it's very difficult to get the information you did across in 1st person - well done.
Good story, a nice light read and it's very difficult to get the information you did across in 1st person - well done.
1/6/2010 c1
13morphine and lollipops
I really like Ben, too. Must come back and read what else you feature them in.

I really like Ben, too. Must come back and read what else you feature them in.
5/11/2009 c1 Mokuni
Black boxers do make you feel sexy.
:)
and you did a good job with those funny sister walking in on scenes.
*thumbs up* thats how my sister reacted too haha
Black boxers do make you feel sexy.
:)
and you did a good job with those funny sister walking in on scenes.
*thumbs up* thats how my sister reacted too haha
10/21/2008 c1
71Subbie
OMG! AMAZING! I LAUGHED SO MUCH!
I really love the sister. REALLY. That's exactly what I would do if I walked in on them!
what did his mum walk in on them doing...? I mean, I have an idea but,- -blushes-
Lee

OMG! AMAZING! I LAUGHED SO MUCH!
I really love the sister. REALLY. That's exactly what I would do if I walked in on them!
what did his mum walk in on them doing...? I mean, I have an idea but,- -blushes-
Lee
3/15/2008 c1
47Helizabeth
that's cute! and it's written REALLY well! my friend would never read it, but i think it's adorable how Ben protects Ross. I do that to my friends, but i don't get raped by them on my living room couch. or anywhere else! but still, really well written, good imagrey, good word choice, good everything!

that's cute! and it's written REALLY well! my friend would never read it, but i think it's adorable how Ben protects Ross. I do that to my friends, but i don't get raped by them on my living room couch. or anywhere else! but still, really well written, good imagrey, good word choice, good everything!
12/1/2007 c1
5boyzarecrazy24
hahahaha that is realy cute! i loved it and i really think u could make another chapter for it :D or more lol
i think u should continue it ^.^ be one hell of a good story if u ask me!
i love it and hope u do write more haha
10/10
~M~

hahahaha that is realy cute! i loved it and i really think u could make another chapter for it :D or more lol
i think u should continue it ^.^ be one hell of a good story if u ask me!
i love it and hope u do write more haha
10/10
~M~
11/28/2007 c1 iMoony too lazy to sign in
You are BRILLIANT! My friend suggested this story to me, because I'm a huge gay-fangirl... and it turned out SO much better than I expected! You're an exceptional writer and I ADORE the POV! It's unexpected and original.
Go. You.
*loves*
~iMoony
You are BRILLIANT! My friend suggested this story to me, because I'm a huge gay-fangirl... and it turned out SO much better than I expected! You're an exceptional writer and I ADORE the POV! It's unexpected and original.
Go. You.
*loves*
~iMoony