for Wingless3/26/2006 c1 Desi Pixie
I love this version.
I love this version.
3/12/2006 c1 midnight-kisses
this poem makes me think of a fallen angel or something of the sort! it makes me wonder what she did to feel so ashamed but that's just me being curious! this poem made me feel calm and like someone else said, it's well structured. The way you repeated the word 'wingless' makes the poem come together!
this poem makes me think of a fallen angel or something of the sort! it makes me wonder what she did to feel so ashamed but that's just me being curious! this poem made me feel calm and like someone else said, it's well structured. The way you repeated the word 'wingless' makes the poem come together!
2/18/2006 c1 
7Teufel66
Oh very sad. Interesting and well structured poem. I really enjoyed reading this. ^_^
7Teufel66Oh very sad. Interesting and well structured poem. I really enjoyed reading this. ^_^
1/20/2006 c1 135Ron A. Liner
I love how you repeat the word "Wingless" in this poem. When someone is angry or frusterated a word or one phrase or one moment might keep playing in their head and it so reminds me of that. It's very short and elegant.
135Ron A. LinerI love how you repeat the word "Wingless" in this poem. When someone is angry or frusterated a word or one phrase or one moment might keep playing in their head and it so reminds me of that. It's very short and elegant.
1/5/2006 c1 129Oriel Lysandra
"Now fallen from grace / The shame across her face" for some reason I love that rhyme... This also reminds me of an incredible story by The Mars Violet, that she doesn't have on her account anymore..
129Oriel Lysandra"Now fallen from grace / The shame across her face" for some reason I love that rhyme... This also reminds me of an incredible story by The Mars Violet, that she doesn't have on her account anymore..