3/12/2006 c1 midnight-kisses
oh feeling the strength here, i think i can really relate to this! It's like a protest against fakes and the human clones that dominate our economy! I love the last line, it's like a statement!

2/8/2006 c1 34Ethereal Kisses
Hey,

Thanks so much for the reviews!

Wow, I love the anger and the relentless desire to succeed in this poem. In particular, that feeling of cold clear determination and confidence.The last line really brought that emotion through - "And it will be me." Full stop. Very powerful.

You can tell that this personal. Very well done, you've brought out feeling and emotions perfectly in view of the context.

~ Ethreal Kisses ~