for Poem For Him7/6/2006 c1 Black Mustang
Hey! I love this poem its very sweet and sentimental. It also has elements though of sadness and longing like the line "It takes time to find the other half". I really like this. Thank you for taking the time out to review some of my stuff. I'm glad you like it!Keep on writing and remember tomorrows a new day!-Black Mustang-
Hey! I love this poem its very sweet and sentimental. It also has elements though of sadness and longing like the line "It takes time to find the other half". I really like this. Thank you for taking the time out to review some of my stuff. I'm glad you like it!Keep on writing and remember tomorrows a new day!-Black Mustang-
3/17/2006 c1 
46fall3nang3l
Awesome. Just awesome.
I love how it still gives you hope that you will find the right one at the right time someday...
I hope I will...
46fall3nang3lAwesome. Just awesome.
I love how it still gives you hope that you will find the right one at the right time someday...
I hope I will...
1/3/2006 c1 20Pheobe Meryll
kinda cute. I like the rythem. the lines "But patience is a virtue/And very difficult to be" was a bit strange because, after asserting that patience is a virtue, you say it's hard to BE...a virtue? I know it wouldn't rhyme, but 'attain' would be a better word...anyway, nice stuff. ;)
20Pheobe Meryllkinda cute. I like the rythem. the lines "But patience is a virtue/And very difficult to be" was a bit strange because, after asserting that patience is a virtue, you say it's hard to BE...a virtue? I know it wouldn't rhyme, but 'attain' would be a better word...anyway, nice stuff. ;)