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for as softly we were

8/16/2009 c1 173Little girl Big world
I really like this piece and the style!

The ending was sad but wonderful!

Nice job.

+Adding to Favorites
12/11/2007 c1 3Prieda Solo
oh wow. this is great. I do like this style, and you've handled it very very nicely. Love the eyes stanza best "blue eyes:clear,and speckled-perfect-like

galax(spiral)ies seen from asfarawayas

death away from me (then seemed) away;such awayness as never" Just seemed so beautiful and perfect.

Ending is very very sad. Very beautiful too. well done. You say this is one of your favourites, which is cool because it's really good =D
9/5/2007 c1 16Cinera
I know I already said it, but I still want to applaud someone who can write poetry without the angsty emo bullshit. This is a poem that you can read between the lines, that has depth and perspective and can actually mean something besides my life sucks.

Great job.
1/4/2006 c1 liz
i loved this...i don't know much, if anything, about poetry but i loved reading yours. the bracketed bits made it more interesting. good job =]
1/4/2006 c1 10just a teardrop
i really like this. i love cummings style. 'his surface exactly was peachskin' gorgeous line. beautiful imagery. :D

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