for twelve hours1/23/2006 c5 AnAlterEgoName
oh its horribleand goodclever, clever
but i figured out what made me think it was a girluhm, the hair partmousy hair or something
oh its horribleand goodclever, clever
but i figured out what made me think it was a girluhm, the hair partmousy hair or something
1/23/2006 c4 AnAlterEgoName
hawhaw.parking lot and truck.such simple words to me though
American-English can be dull though, but then again i guess its the way you put it.yeah, i immediently thought girl by the way, i guess its just the way he/she acted
hawhaw.parking lot and truck.such simple words to me though
American-English can be dull though, but then again i guess its the way you put it.yeah, i immediently thought girl by the way, i guess its just the way he/she acted
1/22/2006 c5 
15Failing Mentality
OMG. I would really like to know what happens next.I'm guessing it is a guy, but I wasn't too sure. I first thought it was a girl, but...Please continue.Your Reviewer,Hell's Sorrow
15Failing MentalityOMG. I would really like to know what happens next.I'm guessing it is a guy, but I wasn't too sure. I first thought it was a girl, but...Please continue.Your Reviewer,Hell's Sorrow
1/22/2006 c2 Failing Mentality
Sorry that I didn't review the first chapter, but it was intriguing.Thanks for reviewing 'Look!' for me. I am thinking of making a second chapter, but is not sure.I'm gonna amke this short than because I wanna read the rest now. Thanks!Your Reviewer,Hell's Sorrow
Sorry that I didn't review the first chapter, but it was intriguing.Thanks for reviewing 'Look!' for me. I am thinking of making a second chapter, but is not sure.I'm gonna amke this short than because I wanna read the rest now. Thanks!Your Reviewer,Hell's Sorrow
1/18/2006 c5 11Riley Kathleen
whum...wow...and mind you, your...erm...american? is very good...Better than most poeple I know...*mumbles under breath* lol!
Anyways, awesome...and yeah, I'm not really supose to be reading M rated things when I'm 12, but HEY!
I really do like it thu=ough...interesting.
~TaintedBlackTears
11Riley Kathleenwhum...wow...and mind you, your...erm...american? is very good...Better than most poeple I know...*mumbles under breath* lol!
Anyways, awesome...and yeah, I'm not really supose to be reading M rated things when I'm 12, but HEY!
I really do like it thu=ough...interesting.
~TaintedBlackTears
1/17/2006 c5 9BlackRose423
Its really riveting. You have to write more, some form of closure is more than necessary, good job!
9BlackRose423Its really riveting. You have to write more, some form of closure is more than necessary, good job!
1/16/2006 c1 review
wtf did you actually go through this kind of experience? cuz you write like its personal experience. is it?cuz if its not, you should friggin write a book. goodness. quit fictionpress and write a book.in other words, awesome. ;D
wtf did you actually go through this kind of experience? cuz you write like its personal experience. is it?cuz if its not, you should friggin write a book. goodness. quit fictionpress and write a book.in other words, awesome. ;D
1/16/2006 c4 1dragonwarrior2017
You really need to keep going on this one. I love this story. At first you sorta left the readers in a position that made you think that the character is going to run away then this twist. Really good. Keep going.
1dragonwarrior2017You really need to keep going on this one. I love this story. At first you sorta left the readers in a position that made you think that the character is going to run away then this twist. Really good. Keep going.
1/6/2006 c2 dragonwarrior2017
Hey,This is really good. I hope that you keep going I want to know what is going to happen to her. The way that it is heading with clues like her bottling it up it seems like she is going to get into a fight. Hurry with chap three please.dragonwarrior
Hey,This is really good. I hope that you keep going I want to know what is going to happen to her. The way that it is heading with clues like her bottling it up it seems like she is going to get into a fight. Hurry with chap three please.dragonwarrior
1/5/2006 c2 20sloppy firsts
although i would wish for more dialouge it was nicely written. keep it up!
20sloppy firstsalthough i would wish for more dialouge it was nicely written. keep it up!