for Pierced11/10/2010 c42 deth204
cupid is eros, eros is cupid, eros or cupid is the son of ares and aphrodite, just want to make that clear... though, i haven't read the story yet, I already like it cause its long, i love long stories, but more to very long stories... haha... well, i'll try to read it as soon as possible...
cupid is eros, eros is cupid, eros or cupid is the son of ares and aphrodite, just want to make that clear... though, i haven't read the story yet, I already like it cause its long, i love long stories, but more to very long stories... haha... well, i'll try to read it as soon as possible...
11/9/2010 c42 swords dragons and diet coke
so this story is pretty much amazing! however, i'm now probably gonna have nightmares filled w/ date rape drugs and creepers =/ but anyways, it'll be worth it i guess... lol
so this story is pretty much amazing! however, i'm now probably gonna have nightmares filled w/ date rape drugs and creepers =/ but anyways, it'll be worth it i guess... lol
10/8/2010 c5 
2Septembers
CH5:
"He took the remote from me reverently and pressed the on button. He smiled delightedly when the screen lit up. He turned it off again. On. Off. On."
CH6:
"Cupid came over to me, leaning in closely as he heard the noise coming from the phone. His eyes lit up."
Cupid's character is so cute! Haha!
I noticed a few grammatical errors:
CH 7:
"She bored easily, most of her relationships lasting no more than a week."
It should be "She got bored easily..."
"Cupid followed her gaze. I saw his light up, amused by the sport. To him it must have looked pretty funny. Skaters rolling down ramps on flat boards with tiny wheels. "I want to try that," he announced."
It should be "I saw his eyes lit up..." or his facial expression or something.
Those were the ones I can remember. I'm really liking the story so far :') I'll most likely finish this tonight (I hope anyway, if homework doesn't get in the way lolz) I've been reading a lot of supernatural stories these days and ones involving Greek gods and godesses really draw me in.
I'M OFF TO READ NOW C:
xoxo ~qammy
2SeptembersCH5:
"He took the remote from me reverently and pressed the on button. He smiled delightedly when the screen lit up. He turned it off again. On. Off. On."
CH6:
"Cupid came over to me, leaning in closely as he heard the noise coming from the phone. His eyes lit up."
Cupid's character is so cute! Haha!
I noticed a few grammatical errors:
CH 7:
"She bored easily, most of her relationships lasting no more than a week."
It should be "She got bored easily..."
"Cupid followed her gaze. I saw his light up, amused by the sport. To him it must have looked pretty funny. Skaters rolling down ramps on flat boards with tiny wheels. "I want to try that," he announced."
It should be "I saw his eyes lit up..." or his facial expression or something.
Those were the ones I can remember. I'm really liking the story so far :') I'll most likely finish this tonight (I hope anyway, if homework doesn't get in the way lolz) I've been reading a lot of supernatural stories these days and ones involving Greek gods and godesses really draw me in.
I'M OFF TO READ NOW C:
xoxo ~qammy
10/3/2010 c8 Mangoxckik
Well ive been reading this story and so far to be honest this story seems rushed. The way Bri feels about cupid and other things happens to fast.Idk thats just my opinion though. Ill keep you updated with reviews as I keep reading. Ciao (:
Well ive been reading this story and so far to be honest this story seems rushed. The way Bri feels about cupid and other things happens to fast.Idk thats just my opinion though. Ill keep you updated with reviews as I keep reading. Ciao (:
6/14/2010 c28 Flagellafella
If I got a love letter from a boy with that spelling, I wouldn't date him! I don't date stupid people! No matter how cute!
If I got a love letter from a boy with that spelling, I wouldn't date him! I don't date stupid people! No matter how cute!