for MidNight Tears2/4/2006 c1 
612simpleplan13
I am wondring why you left...wondering
I like this... we can all relate... it isn't your best, but it's still pretty good
612simpleplan13I am wondring why you left...wondering
I like this... we can all relate... it isn't your best, but it's still pretty good
1/30/2006 c1 41sarah1491
Aww, why do you hate your own poetry? You shouldn't! You should be proud of it. :) I like this poem, the speaker seems lonely and sad. I'm not sure if I like the WHOLE poem bolded, it's a bit much in my opinion. But it's your poem, so do what ever you like! ^^
41sarah1491Aww, why do you hate your own poetry? You shouldn't! You should be proud of it. :) I like this poem, the speaker seems lonely and sad. I'm not sure if I like the WHOLE poem bolded, it's a bit much in my opinion. But it's your poem, so do what ever you like! ^^
1/10/2006 c1 298Moon-Chaser
It is interesting because there could be so many reasons why you are crying, a family memeber, a friend, a boyfriend. So many reasons, this poem could speak to many people on different levels. I like that.
Keep it up.
Thanks for reviewing.
298Moon-ChaserIt is interesting because there could be so many reasons why you are crying, a family memeber, a friend, a boyfriend. So many reasons, this poem could speak to many people on different levels. I like that.
Keep it up.
Thanks for reviewing.
1/5/2006 c1 13KwazyKandyPie
what? it's great! i love the line:"At mid-night nobody can hear my slient tears."excellent. ^_^-KwazyKandyPie AKA Kelly Ann-
13KwazyKandyPiewhat? it's great! i love the line:"At mid-night nobody can hear my slient tears."excellent. ^_^-KwazyKandyPie AKA Kelly Ann-