for Slip
11/5/2006 c1 Asa
Overall a good script. If you can get away with the profanity in school, I'll say it's superb. The duality in the last quarter of dialogue adds a sence of...confusion in the best possible way. It gives the audience like a, "So that's what's going on inside his head." kind of feeling.
Overall a good script. If you can get away with the profanity in school, I'll say it's superb. The duality in the last quarter of dialogue adds a sence of...confusion in the best possible way. It gives the audience like a, "So that's what's going on inside his head." kind of feeling.