for monologue on origami angels, anesthetic & alcohol5/23/2009 c1 
145young and the reckless
holy man.
that just emanates *power*
i wish i could give you more,
but i'm just sort of speechless.
yesyesyes. fantastic.
145young and the recklessholy man.
that just emanates *power*
i wish i could give you more,
but i'm just sort of speechless.
yesyesyes. fantastic.
10/6/2006 c1 emergency room romantic
sometimes poems leave you breathless, and speechless, and numb inside.
this is one of them - -
absolutely fucking gorgeous.
sometimes poems leave you breathless, and speechless, and numb inside.
this is one of them - -
absolutely fucking gorgeous.
1/24/2006 c1 36contrast and friction
Sorry for the late review..
But, wow this is just beautiful. Every single line is so powerful and so intense. It's just really really amazing. I like the formatting too, it isn't too overdone and it definitely adds to the piece. This piece is going on faves :)
36contrast and frictionSorry for the late review..
But, wow this is just beautiful. Every single line is so powerful and so intense. It's just really really amazing. I like the formatting too, it isn't too overdone and it definitely adds to the piece. This piece is going on faves :)
1/7/2006 c1 47agirlnamed-aly
Wow.
I don't really know what to say about this. The use of words alone is enough to grab my utmost attention; they're weaved together so so perfectly and powerfully.
I do think some people will have trouble interpreting exactly what the poem means - but I feel I really understand the feelings and emotions behind, mostly because I've gone through a similar experience.
A part of this poem that really stood out for me were:
"i don’t know what i first saw in you, maybe the passion against a disintegrating world but nowi understand it was only your inability to accept anythingcontrary to yourself, anything not perfect"
That really hit home for me. I absolutely loved it.
xoxo Aly
47agirlnamed-alyWow.
I don't really know what to say about this. The use of words alone is enough to grab my utmost attention; they're weaved together so so perfectly and powerfully.
I do think some people will have trouble interpreting exactly what the poem means - but I feel I really understand the feelings and emotions behind, mostly because I've gone through a similar experience.
A part of this poem that really stood out for me were:
"i don’t know what i first saw in you, maybe the passion against a disintegrating world but nowi understand it was only your inability to accept anythingcontrary to yourself, anything not perfect"
That really hit home for me. I absolutely loved it.
xoxo Aly
1/7/2006 c1 a lonely september
holy shit, this was amazing. pure art here, each line was so perfert. 'onionskin-fragile words' beautiful. this was incredible.
holy shit, this was amazing. pure art here, each line was so perfert. 'onionskin-fragile words' beautiful. this was incredible.
1/6/2006 c1 149phthalo blue
Amazing! I loved "i h a t e your selfish litany of dreams, the ecstasy of visions/delusions against a break sun, the methodical again-dissection of the half-life" It's just amazing! I'm speechless.
149phthalo blueAmazing! I loved "i h a t e your selfish litany of dreams, the ecstasy of visions/delusions against a break sun, the methodical again-dissection of the half-life" It's just amazing! I'm speechless.
1/6/2006 c1 879Moondog Dozier
Wonderful the way you entwine the abstract and the concrete images. This is really like an outburst of a running inner monologue that keeps biting at the intended then drops some light images in to the flow. Good work.
879Moondog DozierWonderful the way you entwine the abstract and the concrete images. This is really like an outburst of a running inner monologue that keeps biting at the intended then drops some light images in to the flow. Good work.