
3/26/2014 c1 MiaxDanny
That was really good 'sep for the few mistakes here and there. Could you please read one of my fanfiction stories 'How could you love a monster'? Since your good at writing could you tell me if its good or bad. If you do want to look my username is MiaxDanny.
That was really good 'sep for the few mistakes here and there. Could you please read one of my fanfiction stories 'How could you love a monster'? Since your good at writing could you tell me if its good or bad. If you do want to look my username is MiaxDanny.
7/29/2013 c1
1Menn
Have you ever read "Quinnessential?!" I am all excited because "Quinn" and "Elliot" are the names of 2 other Slash characters from it. I thought this was sort of fanficiton for a fictionpress story. XD Sorry, had to get that out of my system.
I like Quinn's sort of bad-boysih/obnoxious way of speaking. ahah YES, QUINN. Jesus, he is SASSY and hot. Your writing is freaking straightforward, and GOD. The silhouette scene? GAHHH HHAH. And of course. Of course Quinn suggest something like that the end. xD Only for a one-shot, right? I would not mind ready more. HSHAH

Have you ever read "Quinnessential?!" I am all excited because "Quinn" and "Elliot" are the names of 2 other Slash characters from it. I thought this was sort of fanficiton for a fictionpress story. XD Sorry, had to get that out of my system.
I like Quinn's sort of bad-boysih/obnoxious way of speaking. ahah YES, QUINN. Jesus, he is SASSY and hot. Your writing is freaking straightforward, and GOD. The silhouette scene? GAHHH HHAH. And of course. Of course Quinn suggest something like that the end. xD Only for a one-shot, right? I would not mind ready more. HSHAH
7/24/2013 c1
2Listening-up-on-you
I couldn't even spare time to come up with my extraordinary review. I was so entranced by this piece. I know you probably don't write or won't read this comment but I loved this! I'll use it as inspiration for my story! It was really an exciting and satisfying read. I loved that, I really did. When people get caught doing things they shouldn't in places, especially by a crowd, it's really, I just can't get enough. It was funny and I loved the characters. I have to say that I think Quinn was my favorite, I just loved his attitude. They seem like such a couple, probably get into things like this all the time. I can only imagine and wonder. I was also listening to a song that made, to me, the moment even funnier. I was listening to Save Room by John Legend. I think it was just perfect, it's so early in the morning too! Haha. Thanks so much for posting this! Wishing you the best.
-Thanks for sharing
-Continue to write

I couldn't even spare time to come up with my extraordinary review. I was so entranced by this piece. I know you probably don't write or won't read this comment but I loved this! I'll use it as inspiration for my story! It was really an exciting and satisfying read. I loved that, I really did. When people get caught doing things they shouldn't in places, especially by a crowd, it's really, I just can't get enough. It was funny and I loved the characters. I have to say that I think Quinn was my favorite, I just loved his attitude. They seem like such a couple, probably get into things like this all the time. I can only imagine and wonder. I was also listening to a song that made, to me, the moment even funnier. I was listening to Save Room by John Legend. I think it was just perfect, it's so early in the morning too! Haha. Thanks so much for posting this! Wishing you the best.
-Thanks for sharing
-Continue to write
11/25/2012 c1 Guest
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8/19/2011 c1
7A-Crimson-Memory
Hahahaha this was pretty hilarious! They're teenagers all over again! Of course a silhouette of that is pretty hilarious!

Hahahaha this was pretty hilarious! They're teenagers all over again! Of course a silhouette of that is pretty hilarious!
4/9/2011 c1
12Reminising Obsession
This...IS FRIGGN AWESOME!MADE ME SMILE and UH IT ALSO WAS HAWT!Love Ell's and Quinn.So cute.Gotta add it to my faves:)

This...IS FRIGGN AWESOME!MADE ME SMILE and UH IT ALSO WAS HAWT!Love Ell's and Quinn.So cute.Gotta add it to my faves:)
10/21/2008 c1
71Subbie
OMG! HAHAHAHAHA!
So FUNY!
I rolled off my spinny-chair while reading this!
Lee

OMG! HAHAHAHAHA!
So FUNY!
I rolled off my spinny-chair while reading this!
Lee
7/13/2007 c1 tia-blue
that was the PERFECT blend of hotness and cute fluffy goodness and absolute hilarity! I loved every line! I just have to ask (beg?) are more Quin/ Elliot stories a possibility? because i would read/review/worship each addition ^_^
that was the PERFECT blend of hotness and cute fluffy goodness and absolute hilarity! I loved every line! I just have to ask (beg?) are more Quin/ Elliot stories a possibility? because i would read/review/worship each addition ^_^
3/15/2007 c1
1DaysofInspiration
wow. wowowowowowowowow.
i have read this story like 23 times now (i don't know why it took me this long to review), and just, wow.
ITS SO GOOD!
its the perfect combination of amazingly hot smut and cute gay boys in love and utter hilarity.
and this:
"-And by fruit, I mean apples. Not Quinn, though looking at him makes me smile too."
is one of the best lines i've ever read.
i just LOVE IT!

wow. wowowowowowowowow.
i have read this story like 23 times now (i don't know why it took me this long to review), and just, wow.
ITS SO GOOD!
its the perfect combination of amazingly hot smut and cute gay boys in love and utter hilarity.
and this:
"-And by fruit, I mean apples. Not Quinn, though looking at him makes me smile too."
is one of the best lines i've ever read.
i just LOVE IT!
11/22/2006 c1 That girl with the name
Yeah.
My cousin Shawn would thank you for this but... He's getting laid right now.
So my cousins/aunts/uncles/other relatives are coming over for Thanksgiving.
And my friend has me read this story.
Now, my gay cousin Shawn is sitting on my lap, and he reads it. Then starts moaning and laughing at the same time.
Shawn's boyfriend comes around, wondering what's going on. Jake reads it, then pulls Shawn into the guest room.
You got my cousin laid. Go you.
But yeah, I thought this was hilarious. xD
Keep on writing.
Yeah.
My cousin Shawn would thank you for this but... He's getting laid right now.
So my cousins/aunts/uncles/other relatives are coming over for Thanksgiving.
And my friend has me read this story.
Now, my gay cousin Shawn is sitting on my lap, and he reads it. Then starts moaning and laughing at the same time.
Shawn's boyfriend comes around, wondering what's going on. Jake reads it, then pulls Shawn into the guest room.
You got my cousin laid. Go you.
But yeah, I thought this was hilarious. xD
Keep on writing.
5/31/2006 c1
20love.strawberries
I laughed all through this, it was perfect! I love the way these two talked with each other, exchanging all those little quips... But now I can't look at Kitty the same way ever again... "What does this have to do with Kitty?" you ask? Her boyfriend's name is Quinn.

I laughed all through this, it was perfect! I love the way these two talked with each other, exchanging all those little quips... But now I can't look at Kitty the same way ever again... "What does this have to do with Kitty?" you ask? Her boyfriend's name is Quinn.
5/25/2006 c1 tiablue
that was so fucking hilarious!
that was so fucking hilarious!