for You cannot love in death1/7/2006 c1 
27Persufala
hmm... i like the originality of how you are conveying the theme. it really is good. but they are some confusing parts where one can't be sure what you are talking about. you may want to think about clearing it up some.
27Persufalahmm... i like the originality of how you are conveying the theme. it really is good. but they are some confusing parts where one can't be sure what you are talking about. you may want to think about clearing it up some.
1/7/2006 c1 Just another reviewer
Only one word to describe this.. beautiful... "A cloud slept thin, draped over the lake." I like that.. you describe well.. good job!
Only one word to describe this.. beautiful... "A cloud slept thin, draped over the lake." I like that.. you describe well.. good job!