
12/9/2014 c7 Slytherinjunky
Holy crap. That was one of the best stories I've read on here. It only comes second to "If found, do not return."
The ending was especially great. Keep up the writing man! :)
Holy crap. That was one of the best stories I've read on here. It only comes second to "If found, do not return."
The ending was especially great. Keep up the writing man! :)
12/7/2012 c2 Psychoholic
Holy. Crap.
This is SO awesomely gruesomely morbidly COOL. I freaking love this kind of stuff.
You're such a talented writer. I mean, I love to watch horror movies, and this makes me think that it would be THE BEST FUCKING movie ever, if you decide to make it one, of course. ;)
Bloodily yours, Santokae
Holy. Crap.
This is SO awesomely gruesomely morbidly COOL. I freaking love this kind of stuff.
You're such a talented writer. I mean, I love to watch horror movies, and this makes me think that it would be THE BEST FUCKING movie ever, if you decide to make it one, of course. ;)
Bloodily yours, Santokae
4/21/2012 c7 Miss Cannibal
Nothing tastes better then blood and skin. Lulz ;3
Nothing tastes better then blood and skin. Lulz ;3
1/4/2011 c1
26Halfbloodlycan
I like the personality of the character and the story. It's also got a nice taste of gore that fits in well and isn't overdone. At least not to me.

I like the personality of the character and the story. It's also got a nice taste of gore that fits in well and isn't overdone. At least not to me.
9/19/2009 c7
4WhiteSand
Hey, well done! I'm drunk! I like all the danger. All the blood; very bold of you. Freaking nasty.

Hey, well done! I'm drunk! I like all the danger. All the blood; very bold of you. Freaking nasty.
9/19/2009 c1 WhiteSand
I know you wrote this a long time ago but I'm scouring FP for some really good stuff, and I want you to know that this one is really sick and exciting so far. Good job!
I know you wrote this a long time ago but I'm scouring FP for some really good stuff, and I want you to know that this one is really sick and exciting so far. Good job!
6/8/2009 c7
8maddeningly.mad
...I'm not sure if this was what you were aiming for, but I was giggling the entire time I was reading this. If it's not what you WERE hoping for, then... uh... oops. ^_^
Well, I loved it and it was fantastically funny, and... yeah. XD

...I'm not sure if this was what you were aiming for, but I was giggling the entire time I was reading this. If it's not what you WERE hoping for, then... uh... oops. ^_^
Well, I loved it and it was fantastically funny, and... yeah. XD
8/1/2008 c7
1GraphiteSkies
This is the most fantastically gory thing I've ever read. The order of the events is a tad ambiguous at times, but the story is otherwise brilliant. Michael is a fantastic character. He's repulsive but at the same time dangerously enticing.
I especially enjoyed how he managed to corrupt Alicia by the end, there's nothing better than innocence defiled.

This is the most fantastically gory thing I've ever read. The order of the events is a tad ambiguous at times, but the story is otherwise brilliant. Michael is a fantastic character. He's repulsive but at the same time dangerously enticing.
I especially enjoyed how he managed to corrupt Alicia by the end, there's nothing better than innocence defiled.
7/17/2008 c7
8Violent Messiah
Great read, man, although strangely enough I didn't find it really gory at all, just bloody enough. Then again I write zombie fiction, so I could be biased, so who knows, right?
I did the characters, especially Michael Sullivan. In too man stories, I've always rooted for the bad guy that seemed more interesting then the good guy, but to no avail. FINALLY, I see the bad guy gets his time to shine and I enjoyed it. I also liked how you had moments of humanity and even remorse to surface now and again which just fleshed the character out even more and added extra complexities that made the story a must read.
The plot was a little over the top, but I think that added to its dark charm...sometimes you need a story so out there its bordering on the extremely improbable, just as long as its well written, which this was. The pacing was excellent...never dragged, never stalled, and something was always ready to pop off just around the corner. Only a few grammar errors here and there, but nothing major.
All in all, I thought it was goodness. Kind of makes me think of what would Showtime's Dexter be like if he was an unrepentant cannibal, and that's a good thing. Cheers!

Great read, man, although strangely enough I didn't find it really gory at all, just bloody enough. Then again I write zombie fiction, so I could be biased, so who knows, right?
I did the characters, especially Michael Sullivan. In too man stories, I've always rooted for the bad guy that seemed more interesting then the good guy, but to no avail. FINALLY, I see the bad guy gets his time to shine and I enjoyed it. I also liked how you had moments of humanity and even remorse to surface now and again which just fleshed the character out even more and added extra complexities that made the story a must read.
The plot was a little over the top, but I think that added to its dark charm...sometimes you need a story so out there its bordering on the extremely improbable, just as long as its well written, which this was. The pacing was excellent...never dragged, never stalled, and something was always ready to pop off just around the corner. Only a few grammar errors here and there, but nothing major.
All in all, I thought it was goodness. Kind of makes me think of what would Showtime's Dexter be like if he was an unrepentant cannibal, and that's a good thing. Cheers!
12/19/2007 c7 RTQ
it was...awesome. beautifully awesome. the descriptions were perfect and gave me a look into a cannibal's mind frame. i just wish it was longer.
it was...awesome. beautifully awesome. the descriptions were perfect and gave me a look into a cannibal's mind frame. i just wish it was longer.
8/2/2007 c2
1onlyuptosaveit
This is great but I had to stop here due to a wee bit of queasiness- not the best thing to read as you're just getting over the stomach flu, no?

This is great but I had to stop here due to a wee bit of queasiness- not the best thing to read as you're just getting over the stomach flu, no?
7/18/2007 c7
1I Adore Linear Regression
The ending is well, amazing. You have a great writing style and I much appreciate you putting me on your C2. This story... is just... excellent!

The ending is well, amazing. You have a great writing style and I much appreciate you putting me on your C2. This story... is just... excellent!