2/15/2006 c1 132mizu no kokoro
truly inspiriing~ its been awhile since i last seen fireworks, but you poem described the sight well and refreshed my memories^^ good work
keep writing!
truly inspiriing~ its been awhile since i last seen fireworks, but you poem described the sight well and refreshed my memories^^ good work
keep writing!
1/8/2006 c1 21bunnyrabbit228
Cute poem. It stands out against all the other dark poems here and it just makes you want to smile. Nice job, keep up the good work.
-bunnyrabbit228
Cute poem. It stands out against all the other dark poems here and it just makes you want to smile. Nice job, keep up the good work.
-bunnyrabbit228
1/8/2006 c1 11les petits bateaux
Yes, fireworks are extremely beautiful. Your descriptions are truly amazing, and even though we don't write it down, we definitely feel the same way when we admire the fireworks.
Yes, fireworks are extremely beautiful. Your descriptions are truly amazing, and even though we don't write it down, we definitely feel the same way when we admire the fireworks.
1/8/2006 c1 36contrast and friction
I like this. It's so simple, but the images and description are very pretty. Nice write :)
I like this. It's so simple, but the images and description are very pretty. Nice write :)