for vines8/6/2006 c1 
18theatrical rhapsodies
This is ok...(and when I say "ok" I mean Brilliant!) Great work!
Loves, theatrical rhapsodies
18theatrical rhapsodiesThis is ok...(and when I say "ok" I mean Brilliant!) Great work!
Loves, theatrical rhapsodies
3/26/2006 c1 Ajna
Amazing and very fitting ending. I absolutely love the third-to-last stanza. This is going on my favorites.
Amazing and very fitting ending. I absolutely love the third-to-last stanza. This is going on my favorites.
3/6/2006 c1 14method acting
I like this loads. I adore the vivid images, it's people like you who mae this world something. You look at something, anything, that anyone could see. They think one thing and walk away, you think another and ponder for hours. Don't be afraid.
14method actingI like this loads. I adore the vivid images, it's people like you who mae this world something. You look at something, anything, that anyone could see. They think one thing and walk away, you think another and ponder for hours. Don't be afraid.
2/3/2006 c1 boob
rocks. as in it.
if you're doing the whole 'urban voices' thing, send this one. it's skanky.
superslosh.
rocks. as in it.
if you're doing the whole 'urban voices' thing, send this one. it's skanky.
superslosh.
1/18/2006 c1 esther electric
how true.great job.
how true.great job.
1/15/2006 c1 78acrobia
Interesting short piece, I like the cryptic images, like scenes that take place in darkness and that are hard to grasp, but that are there. I admire the way you have used the vines, the lines "narcissism/threatened to grow like a vine/up and down her bony frame" are wonderful and very descriptive - the images that you have created are amaizing, it is almost like they pop up to the reader, but when we think we got it, it's not quite there - its beautiful. The last line as well, "old habits die hard" is wonderful, very fitting, and a very powerful ending to such a strong piece. keep writing!xo - Acrobia
78acrobiaInteresting short piece, I like the cryptic images, like scenes that take place in darkness and that are hard to grasp, but that are there. I admire the way you have used the vines, the lines "narcissism/threatened to grow like a vine/up and down her bony frame" are wonderful and very descriptive - the images that you have created are amaizing, it is almost like they pop up to the reader, but when we think we got it, it's not quite there - its beautiful. The last line as well, "old habits die hard" is wonderful, very fitting, and a very powerful ending to such a strong piece. keep writing!xo - Acrobia
1/13/2006 c1 90poetic abortion
"old habits die hard" - so true.
the whole thing (& summary) is so tantalizing. just.so.perfect.
~* noelle
90poetic abortion"old habits die hard" - so true.
the whole thing (& summary) is so tantalizing. just.so.perfect.
~* noelle
1/10/2006 c1 63lackluster
the whole idea of this is tantalizing.
"old habits die hard"- so very true.
63lacklusterthe whole idea of this is tantalizing.
"old habits die hard"- so very true.
1/9/2006 c1 account not in use
wow...so many things to be taken from this. i can't put my feelings into words. well done.
wow...so many things to be taken from this. i can't put my feelings into words. well done.
1/8/2006 c1 58White Tea and Ginger
Is this an edited version? I think I've read something very much like this before.
Anyway, love the idea. Well written.
Keep up the great work!
58White Tea and GingerIs this an edited version? I think I've read something very much like this before.
Anyway, love the idea. Well written.
Keep up the great work!
1/8/2006 c1 20sloppy firsts
you're back! am extremely pleased. I love the metaphor in this. everything is just so provoking and powerful. and the third stanza really comes out as a whisper as well. elegant and graceful as always.
keep writing
s2 chaos
20sloppy firstsyou're back! am extremely pleased. I love the metaphor in this. everything is just so provoking and powerful. and the third stanza really comes out as a whisper as well. elegant and graceful as always.
keep writing
s2 chaos