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58White Tea and Ginger
Oh, very artsy and beautifully written. The wording is fantastic. I feel so full now.
58White Tea and GingerOh, very artsy and beautifully written. The wording is fantastic. I feel so full now.
1/8/2006 c1 94smile persephone
My jaw dropped while I read this.
This is brilliance.
I simply adore the parenthetical bits of the poem. The imagery is flawless. The complexity of thought within the poem itself. The everything. Amazing.
I'm dying to know your secrets of attaining perfection. Because this is perfection.
(When are you publishing?)
94smile persephoneMy jaw dropped while I read this.
This is brilliance.
I simply adore the parenthetical bits of the poem. The imagery is flawless. The complexity of thought within the poem itself. The everything. Amazing.
I'm dying to know your secrets of attaining perfection. Because this is perfection.
(When are you publishing?)
1/8/2006 c1 10just a teardrop
wow! i love this! its amazing! i would add it to my faves but i have 30 :( sorry. but gorgeous. i especially love the (onetwo, onetwo it pulsates) and the general formatting. gorgeous.
10just a teardropwow! i love this! its amazing! i would add it to my faves but i have 30 :( sorry. but gorgeous. i especially love the (onetwo, onetwo it pulsates) and the general formatting. gorgeous.