for Him2/26/2006 c1 
871no.peace.los.angeles
Favorite line: "to make poems/in secret/love/of you." That sounds so romantic and wonderful. Hm. I don't know what to tell you as far as what you should do. I would just tell them (if you haven't already). You might get hurt, but then again, you never know unless you say something. Good luck. Keep writing! :)
871no.peace.los.angelesFavorite line: "to make poems/in secret/love/of you." That sounds so romantic and wonderful. Hm. I don't know what to tell you as far as what you should do. I would just tell them (if you haven't already). You might get hurt, but then again, you never know unless you say something. Good luck. Keep writing! :)
1/27/2006 c1 47Eve Amare
Wow, this is so amazing. You are writing something so full of emotions and love while you write about writing. I really enjoy how you relate your writing to him/her, how they make you want to write about them. I have never read anything that put my love love for writing in such poetic words or read anything that shows others as well as myself that the need to write about one that you care about is a true sign of the love of a writer. Great job,
As Always,
Eve
47Eve AmareWow, this is so amazing. You are writing something so full of emotions and love while you write about writing. I really enjoy how you relate your writing to him/her, how they make you want to write about them. I have never read anything that put my love love for writing in such poetic words or read anything that shows others as well as myself that the need to write about one that you care about is a true sign of the love of a writer. Great job,
As Always,
Eve
1/24/2006 c1 1Goddess Aurora
Very sweet! I especially like the format and structure of this poem. It's unique from others.
1Goddess AuroraVery sweet! I especially like the format and structure of this poem. It's unique from others.
1/10/2006 c1 20Pheobe Meryll
I love that line about writing till your fingers get stiff...I've definately done that a lot. Though I haven't been in a situation like this before, I really could feel what you were experiencing through your expression. I didn't really like the "honey/smooth/soft voice" thing as it broke up the flow and looked like you were looking for a word. However I've never taken any kind of poetry class so I don't know much about the different styalistic things. good poem overall.
20Pheobe MeryllI love that line about writing till your fingers get stiff...I've definately done that a lot. Though I haven't been in a situation like this before, I really could feel what you were experiencing through your expression. I didn't really like the "honey/smooth/soft voice" thing as it broke up the flow and looked like you were looking for a word. However I've never taken any kind of poetry class so I don't know much about the different styalistic things. good poem overall.
1/8/2006 c1 a lonely september
'Your honey/smooth/softvoice traveling into my body'm, beautiful. sweet.
'Your honey/smooth/softvoice traveling into my body'm, beautiful. sweet.