for Down the Road5/21/2008 c1 
15miscellanea
This reminds me of love, and how when people break up or lose their parners, their expectations are so high, that they can't see what they really need. Like the song lyric, "You better let somebody love you before it's too late" (I think it was Desperado?) Anyways, I liked this macho much. Very well crafted.
15miscellaneaThis reminds me of love, and how when people break up or lose their parners, their expectations are so high, that they can't see what they really need. Like the song lyric, "You better let somebody love you before it's too late" (I think it was Desperado?) Anyways, I liked this macho much. Very well crafted.
8/29/2006 c1 myheartwantsyou
the rythm was fine, but jeez, the subject was pointless. you sent me a review for my essay thing the other day, i appreciate my mom, but that wasnt what i was talking about. know the whole story before you call people ungrateful.
the rythm was fine, but jeez, the subject was pointless. you sent me a review for my essay thing the other day, i appreciate my mom, but that wasnt what i was talking about. know the whole story before you call people ungrateful.
8/10/2006 c1 selene909
That was very deep and yet not in that fake overly pretentions way some writers tend to be. It me smile and also this is something I would read to a kid. it's for all ages.
Thanks for the review. I will keep what you suggested in mind.
That was very deep and yet not in that fake overly pretentions way some writers tend to be. It me smile and also this is something I would read to a kid. it's for all ages.
Thanks for the review. I will keep what you suggested in mind.
2/1/2006 c1 21Henry Gray
Heh. That was pretty cool. Made me smile and made me think. I'm not sure what else you need for a good poem besides that.
21Henry GrayHeh. That was pretty cool. Made me smile and made me think. I'm not sure what else you need for a good poem besides that.
1/22/2006 c1 7Fresh C
Nice poem. I'm not sure whether to laugh or not, but I think it's good. And I believe I understand your central point. You should take advantage of what comes to you or you may want it later and lose it. At least that's how I interpreted it.
7Fresh CNice poem. I'm not sure whether to laugh or not, but I think it's good. And I believe I understand your central point. You should take advantage of what comes to you or you may want it later and lose it. At least that's how I interpreted it.
1/19/2006 c1 startsapart
I don't get whatever deep meaning it's supposed to have. Is it supposed to be funny? Probably not, but I don't know what it's supposed to be.
I don't get whatever deep meaning it's supposed to have. Is it supposed to be funny? Probably not, but I don't know what it's supposed to be.