for Poetry for Lovers2/7/2006 c1 
19Lulu2606
Beautiful poem...really loved the last four lines. Perfect ending, good job :)
19Lulu2606Beautiful poem...really loved the last four lines. Perfect ending, good job :)
2/6/2006 c1 5degeneration-X
So few words, yet so much meaning. I wudn't put this in angst, i deem it tragedy!
5degeneration-XSo few words, yet so much meaning. I wudn't put this in angst, i deem it tragedy!
1/27/2006 c1 14tehrave-deactivated
"words bubbling up", lovely. And a quatrain!
I like the sentence construction. It makes it feel... I don't know, twisted and twined. Convoluted even though it's so simple.
14tehrave-deactivated"words bubbling up", lovely. And a quatrain!
I like the sentence construction. It makes it feel... I don't know, twisted and twined. Convoluted even though it's so simple.