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for Prayer to the Nephil

3/31/2006 c1 73fading innocence
o.O Wow...that was strong...YHWH? Is that from Angel Sanctuary or am I an idiot? Because I'm not a religious person...
1/9/2006 c1 18bleed gilead
although the subject is a bit disturbing (um, come back nephilim? augh.), it's a nice mix of imagery and christian mythology/references. the repetitions of lines beginning with "let" do well. i like the line "women no longer fail to bear/children of the godborn" (but the lines before seem a little weak.) and i don't know what you mean by "ael" (and i even googled it...). and the line "let your master once again destroy/the foundations of well-being" could be explained further? (the foundations of well-being? uh.)
1/9/2006 c1 108AnAngelWithTarnishedWings
lol I'm glad you found me, because your work is most enjoyable as well *^_~* so I shall add you as well. I envy for your writting style, I can never use words like yours without it sounding a bit queer.. so 10 points for you! lol
1/9/2006 c1 5RedHairedWriter
that was interesting. and beautiful. a bit to heavy on the man/women stuff for me. But you wrote it really well. It felt like a proper old prayer...

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