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5/26/2006 c1 51rightclick5ave
hi, thanks for the review! (:i read all six of your poems, and i really have to say that i didn't get most of them. maybe when i read them a third or fourth time i'll understand them more.

i couldn't bring myself to review the other five because it would be unfair to just say, "nice poem, keep it up". i really like this one though.

so is the title Vegan Love or Sushi Dreams? or are you gonna write more chapters? yesyes please do [:

these are my favourite lines, because they spoke to me: Her loyal watcher I'd remain / Longing to intervene / To hold onto those elegant hands.

how sad. i feel you. ):
4/5/2006 c1 49Em0tionally UnStAbLe
Wow! I Love this story! your poetry is pretty wicked! Can't wait to read some more though! Laterz!
1/13/2006 c1 Haberdasher
the feelings behind this are very interesting; the way you describe this girl is so intimate, and yet its a poem about wanting to be intimate with someone youre not. i like this paradox. the images are lovely as well. all in all nice work. -The Lady Elaine
1/9/2006 c1 GLP
well. that was interesting. i liked it tho. i don't quite get the title. why sushi? iz x
1/9/2006 c1 124in theory
So heavy with endless impossibilities and thoughts. Interesting, to say the least. Great job.
1/9/2006 c1 A Page
that is beautiful. *adds to fave's list* (your the first there actually) what a great read.

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