for Vegan Love5/26/2006 c1 
51rightclick5ave
hi, thanks for the review! (:i read all six of your poems, and i really have to say that i didn't get most of them. maybe when i read them a third or fourth time i'll understand them more.
i couldn't bring myself to review the other five because it would be unfair to just say, "nice poem, keep it up". i really like this one though.
so is the title Vegan Love or Sushi Dreams? or are you gonna write more chapters? yesyes please do [:
these are my favourite lines, because they spoke to me: Her loyal watcher I'd remain / Longing to intervene / To hold onto those elegant hands.
how sad. i feel you. ):
51rightclick5avehi, thanks for the review! (:i read all six of your poems, and i really have to say that i didn't get most of them. maybe when i read them a third or fourth time i'll understand them more.
i couldn't bring myself to review the other five because it would be unfair to just say, "nice poem, keep it up". i really like this one though.
so is the title Vegan Love or Sushi Dreams? or are you gonna write more chapters? yesyes please do [:
these are my favourite lines, because they spoke to me: Her loyal watcher I'd remain / Longing to intervene / To hold onto those elegant hands.
how sad. i feel you. ):
4/5/2006 c1 49Em0tionally UnStAbLe
Wow! I Love this story! your poetry is pretty wicked! Can't wait to read some more though! Laterz!
49Em0tionally UnStAbLeWow! I Love this story! your poetry is pretty wicked! Can't wait to read some more though! Laterz!
1/13/2006 c1 Haberdasher
the feelings behind this are very interesting; the way you describe this girl is so intimate, and yet its a poem about wanting to be intimate with someone youre not. i like this paradox. the images are lovely as well. all in all nice work. -The Lady Elaine
the feelings behind this are very interesting; the way you describe this girl is so intimate, and yet its a poem about wanting to be intimate with someone youre not. i like this paradox. the images are lovely as well. all in all nice work. -The Lady Elaine
1/9/2006 c1 GLP
well. that was interesting. i liked it tho. i don't quite get the title. why sushi? iz x
well. that was interesting. i liked it tho. i don't quite get the title. why sushi? iz x
1/9/2006 c1 124in theory
So heavy with endless impossibilities and thoughts. Interesting, to say the least. Great job.
124in theorySo heavy with endless impossibilities and thoughts. Interesting, to say the least. Great job.
1/9/2006 c1 A Page
that is beautiful. *adds to fave's list* (your the first there actually) what a great read.
that is beautiful. *adds to fave's list* (your the first there actually) what a great read.