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for maybe its not so bad if i close me eyes i want see

1/16/2006 c1 19toxic-noodle725
ohh. very emotional. liked it.
1/12/2006 c1 14white-chokolat
oh i saw one of your past poetry things and to tell you the truth...sluts always get cheated on
1/11/2006 c1 36norg
i dont know if it was meant to sound like this but it sounded to me like a conversation and well, i guess that it is different from what you usually write. i dont know what it is maybe just an element of some sort? :S anyways i love it as it is different an certainly reminds me of how some things were...
1/11/2006 c1 16Hannah-Hellion
I love the intensity of this poem.When I read it I get some abstract images flash in my head, pieces of bright glass and I imagine the grass being so peaceful and then it snaps back to the darker images with "I break my stretched skin and bleed as I smile" and that line especially reminds me of how I've been feeling recently. x_xAnyway, awesome dark poem!
1/10/2006 c1 a lonely september
'But only air curls around meNoNo!Why couldn’t you take me higher?'i love the rushed, fearful feeling this holds to it. wonderful job with this poem. lovely.

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