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8/16/2006 c1 6Nobody-n-Particular
Why is everything in bold? It strains my eyes, esp being on a comp screen. Perhaps I can better read any of your works if they are not all in bold. Just a suggestion.
2/5/2006 c1 9Kartoffel on Canvas
hmm, i unfortunatly agree with cold. sorry, but it just didnt keep my attention. its a nice thought though.
1/17/2006 c1 15trailingoff
Just because you're published doesn't mean you're good. Anyone can spit words that rhyme on to a page. Unlike you, I read your stuff objectively, and I just plain don't like it. The language is bland and boring, very snail paced. Doesn't have any artistic view waht so ever. Its just...boring.

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