for The KIngless King8/16/2006 c1 
6Nobody-n-Particular
Why is everything in bold? It strains my eyes, esp being on a comp screen. Perhaps I can better read any of your works if they are not all in bold. Just a suggestion.
6Nobody-n-ParticularWhy is everything in bold? It strains my eyes, esp being on a comp screen. Perhaps I can better read any of your works if they are not all in bold. Just a suggestion.
2/5/2006 c1 9Kartoffel on Canvas
hmm, i unfortunatly agree with cold. sorry, but it just didnt keep my attention. its a nice thought though.
9Kartoffel on Canvashmm, i unfortunatly agree with cold. sorry, but it just didnt keep my attention. its a nice thought though.
1/17/2006 c1 15trailingoff
Just because you're published doesn't mean you're good. Anyone can spit words that rhyme on to a page. Unlike you, I read your stuff objectively, and I just plain don't like it. The language is bland and boring, very snail paced. Doesn't have any artistic view waht so ever. Its just...boring.
15trailingoffJust because you're published doesn't mean you're good. Anyone can spit words that rhyme on to a page. Unlike you, I read your stuff objectively, and I just plain don't like it. The language is bland and boring, very snail paced. Doesn't have any artistic view waht so ever. Its just...boring.